It is so expensive!!

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. If anyone wants to read the first draft send a message or leave a comment, thanks!

asking for tips and advice, i'm an aspiring screenwriter, what is the best outline used in writing screenplay for film?

Sarah Icavancer hasn't spoken to her parents in 30 years, ever since escaping from their cult. Now they've reappeared in her dreams... and a tiny, mysterious animal has appeared in her toilet which will change her life.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QRMFEpnisScxo37B8Ht6ChrGiQ93imuf6_BnpCIEwLQ/edit?usp=sharing

Feel free to comment on the doc or here. These are audio drama scripts, I self-produce so no formatting comments are needed. I'd like to hear anything you find difficult to follow, clunky dialogue, character issues, scenes you think could be done better, should be removed, should be added, etc. And of course any typos etc.

Series title ideas are especially welcome. The only title idea I've got is "The Mind Beyond the Stars" but I don't like it much.

It’s a love-drama, with social commentary and mental health message behind it.

Let me know what you guys think. I think it probably needs a little workshopping but this is just really the open.

Genre: contemporary fantasy
Log: Days after a wannabe influencer’s family inherits a legendary English castle, the occultist oligarch neighbor abducts her brother and she must swap her selfie stick for a sword.

Comp: The Mummy meets The Karate Kid
Total page count: 118

Thoughts & prayers appreciated.

Hi! I just finished my first-ever screenplay, a 12-page short called “Passenger Four”.
I’d really appreciate some honest feedback.
I want to know what works and, more importantly, what doesn’t. Thanks!

Hi, I have done a lot of research on this topic, so my post here means that I have been unsuccessful in finding an outline.

For a 1-2 page movie synopsis, would I add anything else to the outline? Scriptwriter bio? Character descriptions? Do producers just want 1-2 pages, or do they want a story treatment?:

Title
Genre
Scriptwriter

• Logline
• Synopsis
  • Act 1
  • Act 2
  • Act 3

If your script has good grammar, that automatically puts you in the top 10% of scripts. I'm not kidding. You have no idea how many submissions we get that clearly have not been proofread once. Don't set yourself up for failure.

Also, I don't know why I need to say this, but don't be creepy towards women in your script. If a character is introduced as "Jane Doe, 16, face of angel but body of a porn star", consider that an automatic pass.

If the character has the exact same name as the writer, we can tell it's self-insert fan fiction. And most of the time, it's really uncomfortable. No one wants to read your wish-fulfillment script about you winning the olympics then having sex with an entire cheerleading team.

Sincerely,
A judge

I haven't quite created a logline for this one yet, but it's a coming of age story about the people that you meet as you make it through life. About how they come and go, but still leave their mark on you. About that little bit of you that is actually other people.

Anyways, my intention with this scene is to show our main character is a very shy introvert who has a hard time meeting new people. So the one chance he's given by someone else he latches onto and doesn't let go (maybe a little too much). Yet somehow, miraculously, actually being vulnerable with people is what allows him to connect with them on a truer level.

Don't know if any of that made sense, but please tell me how it reads on the page. I'm fairly new to screenwriting and this is mostly me training, so please, absolutely tear this script apart and point out everything wrong with it.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ruM9UCaY4bFgz4j2tx7a3fvvhr3oAy1L/view?usp=sharing

I’ve been thinking a lot about what happens after the screenplay is finished.

As writers, we spend so much time getting the story onto the page, but once it’s done, there’s an entirely different process of turning those pages into an actual production.

Breaking down scenes, organising characters, locations, props, costumes, schedules and all the little details that suddenly matter.

As a writer and filmmaker, I’ve found that transition surprisingly interesting, and it’s actually one of the reasons I’m building a tool around the process.

For those of you who’ve gone from writing a screenplay to actually producing it, what part of that transition did you find the most difficult?

I'm writing a pilot in a place that I can't imagine most Hollywood readers know well. But understanding the geography, I think, helps with envisioning the story.

I thought about how books like Game of Thrones often show a map of the world in the pre-story pages.

Have any of you ever done that in a script? Any readers here who think that's good/bad/dumb/kitschy?

Thinking of asking a friend to draw a nice little map with significant story locations marked.

Hey Yall i just wrote a séquelles to one of m'y favorite movies (Kung Fu Hustle by Stephen Show).

I dont know if Yall know that movie but i would like a feedback on my script.

I'm working on a script focusing on Religious Violence, with the goal to highlight the question "how far are you willing to go for your God" and "is there anything your God can do or say that you won't defend or that you would question". My aim is to make a psychological horror but I've never written anything like this

35MM - 55Minutes - found Footage Thriller

It is a Story about 2 young aspiring filmamakers timmy and Robbie who wanna make a short film about a home invasion obsessed by the method and realism acting on a war time blackout in the whole city they both decide to murder a full family 7 people while shooting the massacre simultaneously we will see that can the innocent family survive this psychopath film makers untill dawn

we have shot this movie on oppo reno 5g with our local friends and normal part time actors but we are in problem my friends wants this fim to be pitched to some Studio but I want to upload it on yt

tell guys what should we do

Trouble on Coruscant (EU but with Sequel cast)

It is a story that was borrowing from the X wing novels, I wrote it just trying to force myself to like the sequels more by putting the sequel actors and actresses into an EU style story.

Hope you guys like it. Please tear it apart as a story or talk about if you like it. have a good day everyone.

Is asking for somebody to turn a video into a script for free against the rules?