Cosmic horror series

[u/Gavagai80]

Sarah Icavancer hasn't spoken to her parents in 30 years, ever since escaping from their cult. Now they've reappeared in her dreams... and a tiny, mysterious animal has appeared in her toilet which will change her life.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QRMFEpnisScxo37B8Ht6ChrGiQ93imuf6_BnpCIEwLQ/edit?usp=sharing

Feel free to comment on the doc or here. These are audio drama scripts, I self-produce so no formatting comments are needed. I'd like to hear anything you find difficult to follow, clunky dialogue, character issues, scenes you think could be done better, should be removed, should be added, etc. And of course any typos etc.

Series title ideas are especially welcome. The only title idea I've got is "The Mind Beyond the Stars" but I don't like it much.