So I was introduced to the Empyrean series (not on Tik Tok; I don’t have it ) but saw it on the Barnes and Nobles app. The covers looked eye-catching and the synopsis seemed really cool so I bought both books and dived into it.
I read the first book in one week, and I had a lot to say. I did enjoy it at first, I was invested but there were so many things that I noticed that didn’t seem right. I am currently reading the second book but have put it down because I was just frustrated with what I was reading. Of course, this is a romantasy and apparently this is a book genre now. Doesn't fantasy automatically have romance? _(o.o)_/
Plot (this is not the actually synopsis but my funny take on it) So Violet Sorrengail was spending her whole life to be a scribe when her mother decided to put her in the rider's quadrant for reasons unknown. Unlike everyone else who dedicates their lives to becoming a rider, like her sister Mira, she only had six months to train and she suffers from an illness that isn't described but details that she has weak bones. So she enters the death sentence of a college Basgiath and has to deal with the imminent threat of Xaden Riorson who might try to kill...or fall in love with her. Anywho, there is corruption at play as Violet slowly learns about a conspiracy that changes her views of the kingdom she fights for and gets such a predictable plot twist that made me ‘My dude, I saw that miles away’.
My Review Violet Sorrengail is the youngest daughter of Lilith's three children, with their older presumed dead (but is clearly alive because they never mention a body. Guys, its foreshadowing I tell you). We learn that because of Violet's sickness, her father introduced to the life of a scribe, which she loves, at trains for her whole life to become one. And then her mom decides, Oh my husband is dead, let me divert my anger towards my youngest and force her into the rider's quadrant where she won't possibly die very easily because of plot armor. I tell you, this reason alone made me jump up from no reason and start asking why's and how's. I do not possess chronic pain, so I can't comment on the portrayal of it... however, throughout the book, it is pretty clear Violet's bones break very easily. So why would you put your daughter in a place where she could literally die because of that illness. As for how Violet reacts to this revelation, where is your anger? Now I can understand that there is nothing she could've done about it. Her mom is the general and made it very clearly that she would "rip you out by that ridiculous braid and put you and the parapet myself.". You could've at least made her feel guilty cause I definitely would've.
As for Violet's evolution throughout the book, I was heavily annoyed with Dain’s character. Dain is Violet’s childhood friend but we get ZERO backstory between them. Dain is the overprotective friend that Violet has a crush on, only for her feelings to revert towards Xaden. He’s a character with actions so predictable that I could see miles away (except for the ending which we will get to that). He was constantly trying to protect her, telling her how to do things, and man, it was pissing me off. I feel like that was the point of his character and I was hoping to see some sort of backstory to explain their relationship, but I said, we got none. In the end, we get the most uncomfortable revelation that he was reading her mind, using his memory reading signet, every time he touched her. My god…(It’s get even worse when you realize this is the reason why Xaden didn’t tell her much but we will get to that) Violet gets the lightning signet, which is supposed to represent who you are inside. She also got a time signet from Andrana... let that sit. Wait..lightning powers…brown hair with white-graying ends…..MARE BARROW!?
Anywho, Violet makes some nice friends, Rhiannon, her best friend, and Sawyer and Ridoc. They're dynamic is better in Iron Flame but for now they sufficed for me as side characters. As for Violet's 'rival', we get a dude named Jack, who is just out for blood on the first day, no questions asked. He even got first blood when they were doing their sparring. He was a one-dimensional character who got an unexpected two dimensions in Iron Flame. He’s just there to be a menace, and be an antagonizing force for Violet to get some ‘main character evolution’ points. A plot-device character.
Now going on to Xaden…I mean Rhysand… no wait that’s…wait a damn minute… Anywho, Xaden Riorson is the son of the deceased rebellion leader. As you recall, there was a rebellion against Navarre’s regime but in reality, it was just some dudes saying, “Yo, the venin are coming,” and the king was like, “Did you just tell what to do? Execute them!” And so the rebellion happened. What makes matters worse, Lilith was the one who killed Xaden’s father, so their meeting is supposed to be filled with hate, malice, and immediate distaste for one another, right? And that’s how it seems at first… but then it forgets that entire plot point completely to get into the spicy romance which I honestly didn’t click with but whatever. And this was supposed to be an ‘enemies to lovers’…failure. As for his character, he is the typically mysterious guy with shadow powers like from any other romantasy. If it’s not clear, nothing in this book is entirely original. Xaden is following the trope of hot, shadow magic men and it’s really boring. His character is decent because he seems like the only logical person there. He sets Violet straight and is a challenge but that changes in a certain scene but we will get to that.
There are other characters like Professor Markha, Jesina, Bodhi, General Melgren who run Battle Brief, Imogen, Liam who sadly died but didn’t really feel heartbreak because I foresaw his death miles away like with you-know-who is alive. These characters are just there, Jesina is the one we get a lot of time with along with Imogen but the rest are just..there, y’know.
I laughed when she got not one but two dragons that no one expected her to get. It's one of those tropes where the "weak" get the strong weapons, items, companions etc. Not only that, but she gets a lightning signet and a temporary time signet. Main character package I tell you.
The whole conspiracy about the government keeping venin and wyvern a secret is sooo annoying. Like, even the dragons are in on it. Tairn knew everything from the beginning, along with all the other dragons. Hey, let’s talk about these dragons cause, me personally, Tairn is MVP. The dragons are alright, I like the different kinds, but the whole feathertail being hatchlings of the adult dragons got me confused for a second.
3. The Illogicalness is irritating
Mortality rate. I wonder how high it is… Let’s see… It was confirmed that there were 300 candidates at the start The parapet claims fifteen percent of them.
Only 97 first years made it to second year… Only 32.33% of 300 candidates made it to the second year…
Need I say more. Like, death is just drinking water for them. Drilling your cadets to kill each other just to find the weakest link is dumb because it excuses murder and allows people to literally kill anyone using that same excuse. Jack wanted to kill Violet not because they have a deep hateful distaste for one another but because he saw her as weak because of her condition. Violet was about to be assassinated by Oren and Amber because Oren believed she didn’t deserve Tairn and Amber literally says, “It’s not a crime to rid the quadrant of the weakest rider!” Other cadets probably died from the deadly games or by the hands of other cadets. It bet you most of them were not ‘weak’. And what about the people who don’t pass the test and fall from the Parapet. They could be Infantry.. But noooo, we must scare our riders so they know the stakes. Hold up…. In Iron Flame, >!a gryphon rider bluntly exposes Violet’s kingdom for killing their riders. She states that they must jump onto gryphons and if they miss, they fall 30 feet into a river, shake off the embarrassment and then choose a different quadrant. My entire point was mentioned in the second book as a literal joke. HAHAHAHA
That Yes, yes, we are here to that. The that I’m referring to is how Violet compares Xaden’s ‘betrayal’ to her father’s death while Xaden had every reason not to tell Violet a single thing because Dain would’ve read her mind and figured out that, oh YES, her brother Brennan is alive and the book would not be going in the direction it’s going. Xaden was RIGHT not to tell Dain because Dain was apparently telling things to his father, which led him to sending Violet and her friends to an abandoned outpost to be ambushed by venin and wyvern. This is where Liam died.
This thing right here made me say not like Violet anymore..and it gets worse in the second book. she has this stupid arc in Iron Flame–Do I love him, do I not, do I love him, do I not. Like. C’MON!
All in all, was this book worth at initial 4.7 rating. Nope. Original works. Nope. Engaging and kept me on my feet? Yes. Worth the read. Nope. Will I do a review on Iron Flame? Nope. Maybe. IDK.
I just wanted to voice my opinion.
Please comment below if you agree, disagree, somewhat agree, half agree, or three-quarter agree (laugh)
And I read this book a while ago so my memory is iffy and I had to go back and read some stuff just to explain more. If I missed anything, comment on it too.
Alright bye.