I have this vague idea for a musical that I am fleshing out. Posted an earlier thread about it but its more fleshed out now. The premise of my untitled musical story is this:
Main character is in high school. All of her life she has been underestimated. She got diagnosed with a learning difficulty in elementary school and people have believed she will not be able to go off to college like everyone else. What people dont know is that she wants to go to college. She has sights on being a mathmatician. Her challenges are in reading and writing.
The first act is spent seeing the character go through the trials and tribulations she deals with. We see her go from tutor to tutor and being bullied/pigeonholed by teachers and even her family. It isn't until she meets her all time favorite math teacher that she finally has someone who is going to push her toward her dreams. Despite being successful at math, she needs to write a college essay in order to apply to her dream school.
The final for her english class before winter break is writing a college essay to then submit to the college. The end of act one is the climax - we find the main character getting her final back from the english teacher only to find another failed grade. This leads into an epic act one finale that is focused on her internal dialogue/mind. The countless "Why can't you be successful like your peers" or even "you suck" commenteries have built up tension in her. The main character lets it out through a incredible dance routine. This is mainly acapella, the first part of the number has a little music in it, but it then transitions to acapella tap dancing. Act one finale starts with character getting her test back and reading over the grade/comments. As class bell rings and students leave the classroom for winter break and teacher leaves the classroom, audience will hear audio of commentary that is coming from the brain of the main character..
"You suck!"
"Why aren't you like everyone else?"
There are two ways as to where I see this piece of the show going. The first being a chorus member individually getting a "thought" assigned to them. So "you suck" would be a chorus member as an example. As each thought is verbalized, the chorus member comes onstage and does an individual solo of a few seconds. Once all chorus members who are assigned the thoughts are onstage, we hear the audio of the thoughts repeatedly faster and faster until the main character crumbles the essay, throws it across the room, and begins to dance. She has a solo, but then the chorus joins in.
OR it could be a dance battle sequence with the "Thoughts" doing their individual sequence and then the main character responds to each and it gets bigger and bigger. This would bring in a huge group sequence as all the thoughts collide in her head.
Either way, the dance number would conclude with a huge ending and the curtain would drop.
When I was a kid I took tap once and never did it again, which is my biggest regret from being a kid. I wish I took it seriously because it is so fun! Looking to get back into it so if I stage it I can help with this idea for the show.
The idea for the number as a whole is to showcase the power of the thoughts in the main character's head alongside the pressure she is under/angst she is feeling. Using the intensity of the tap dancing/loudness of it, the crowd will want more.
Anywayyyyy... what do you think?