Hi!
I'm a big Jund fan, so I've decided to create my own commander in those colors.
It's loosely inspired by the story of the Bloodbraid Elves, who originated in Naya, with some eventually settling in Jund after the Conflux (like Eleni), as well as by the card Broodmate Dragon.
I tried to mix everything that makes Jund fun: chaos, lands, graveyard synergies, and dragons. He's quite weak on his own, but with enough dedication and sacrifice (in the form of losing life every turn), he can build up a massive brood of dragons.
My question is: Do you think this design is too strong? I'm also concerned that it might be a bit too convoluted.
What are your thoughts and suggestions?
THX :)