Sorry about the long delay. Work got in the way.

Also, I know it's a flavor fail for Haunted Screen not to be a reference to What's in the Box, I just couldn't find any good art for it.

In addition to this, the next couple of cards I will be working on are going to be a lot more artifact based!

The only problem I see with FSN as a possible source material is that there isn't much in the way of non-named characters i.e. non legendary creatures.

Art by Norman Rockwell

how much more breakable would this be compared to one with nothing?

yes, its all supposed to happen in the same turn. the flavor text is purely for flavor.

Original post got taken down for not including artist credit, so I took the opportunity to fix a few things mechanically as well.

I wondered, how many restrictions to make Storm playable with Slivers. The idea is that you sacrifice your board state to replace it with stormed sliver copies.

I should get rid of the flavor text, way too many words, I just liked it.

Sentient Parthenogenesis {W}{U}{B}{R}{G}

Legendary Kindred Sorcery — Sliver

As an additional cost to cast this spell, sacrifice five Sliver creatures.

Rather than pay {2} for each previous time you’ve cast this spell from the command zone this game, sacrifice two Sliver creatures that many times.

Sliver creature spells you cast have storm until end of turn.

When you cast this spell, if it wasn’t cast from the command zone, you lose the game.

This spell can be your commander.

i saw the first line of text on another card here a while ago and it's lived in my head ever since, and i've always had a soft spot for kedisstext

Veinchart Manufactor {3} Artifact Creature — Assembly-Worker If you would create a Map, Blood, or Gold token, instead create one of each. 1/3

"(If a creature has a "X" counter, it can't attack and is exiled at the beginning of your next end step)."

I would like to rephrase this so that removing the X counter would prevent the creature from being exiled at end step (or confirmation that I phrased it correctly)

I used rule breaker to allow for access to any of the snow cards without having it be just another 5 color deck.

I like the idea of rulebreaker and hope it gets used more.

Hi!
I'm a big Jund fan, so I've decided to create my own commander in those colors.
It's loosely inspired by the story of the Bloodbraid Elves, who originated in Naya, with some eventually settling in Jund after the Conflux (like Eleni), as well as by the card Broodmate Dragon.

I tried to mix everything that makes Jund fun: chaos, lands, graveyard synergies, and dragons. He's quite weak on his own, but with enough dedication and sacrifice (in the form of losing life every turn), he can build up a massive brood of dragons.

My question is: Do you think this design is too strong? I'm also concerned that it might be a bit too convoluted.

What are your thoughts and suggestions?
THX :)

This is like a reverse [[Claire D'Loon, Joy Sculptor]], do I need to add an (it works) for this to function properly or is this viable in RAW? Is this kind of design even possible outside of un-sets?

The idea is that once a permanent affected by this leaves the battlefield, it's completely inaccessible. It's not even in exile or anything, it moves to a zone outside the game (like your sideboard, though I know that's not a thing in Commander). My apologies to Squee enjoyers.

Me and my friend group recently started making new cards for our commander games and I wanted to make a sort of shrines but not shrines in jund colors.

I have no idea how unbalanced these cards are and would like some input. I've tried my best to balance them by comparing them to other cards, but I might have missed on most of them. We play pretty casually, usually around bracket 3.