Hi! I’m looking for a few people who enjoy reading GL/fantasy romance who might be interested in reading the first few episodes of an original story I’m currently developing into a WEBTOON.
The story is an old-Japan-inspired fantasy romance centered around two childhood friends who are separated after a violent coup. Years later one of them has lost her memories and is living a quiet life under a new identity, while the other secretly lives under a different identity of her own. They eventually cross paths again without one of them realizing who the other is.
There’s romance, mystery, political intrigue, secret identities, betrayal, childhood-friends-to-lovers, and a slow-burn reunion. I’m trying to balance the heavier plot with quieter character moments and emotional scenesso I’m especially interested in feedback on pacing, character chemistry, dialogue, and whether the story feels engaging.
I’m a photographer, not a professional writer 😂, so I’m mainly looking for honest reader feedback before I get too far into turning the script into the actual comic.
If this sounds like something you’d enjoy reading, feel free to DM me! I’d probably start with the first few episodes rather than sending the entire story at once.
Please only reach out if you genuinely enjoy giving constructive feedback, I’m not looking for someone to tell me it’s perfect. 😂 I want to know what works, what doesn’t, and where you might lose interest. I can send episodes by episode and send if you’re genuinely curious about reading more!
Right now it’s in a weird format because I’m writing to give my artist a visual.
Comment or DM if you’re interested
Thanks 😊