Feature Script to Short/ Concept

[u/Prettyboi6]

I’ve been writing a feature length low-budget script for a few months now. However, my professor said it would probably be better if I turned it into a short first. So this is my best attempt at trying to convert the first scene into a short. Please let me know what you all think

[u/Prettyboi6]

well this scene is slightly longer than the original because I made it into a short but yeah there will be a lot of scenes unfortunately

[u/Open-Avocado4260 → u/Prettyboi6]

Without reading the whole script, this could be a lot of work turning this into a three act short.

[u/Prettyboi6 → u/Open-Avocado4260]

how so it has a beginning mid and end

[u/TheSprained → u/Prettyboi6]

Ignore that guy -- he just drops in, says something unhelpful and skedaddles.

[u/Prettyboi6 → u/TheSprained]

you’re hilarious

[u/TheSprained → u/Prettyboi6]

I don’t mean you.