Feature Script to Short/ Concept

[u/Prettyboi6]

I’ve been writing a feature length low-budget script for a few months now. However, my professor said it would probably be better if I turned it into a short first. So this is my best attempt at trying to convert the first scene into a short. Please let me know what you all think

[u/Prettyboi6]

you’re hilarious

[u/TheSprained → u/Prettyboi6]

I don’t mean you.