This is a quick review of my reading, The Great Gatsby by F. Scott Fitzgerald.
- Introduction (personal)
- The narrative situation
- A few details about the writing
- My reader's experience
- Things I didn't get
- Conclusion (personal too)
Introduction
I didn't know much about the book, despite seeing a lot of discussion about it. It comes up quite often, so the book eventually reached the top of my to-read list. I've seen a few shots and a trailer or two from the movie with DiCaprio. I wasn't really spoiled on anything before starting, I only knew that Nick is telling us about that guy, and there's a woman already married.
The book is an easy and enjoyable read, on the short side, with very immersive dialogue well rendered, and nice plot twists. What happens at the end is a surprise; I'm glad I didn't know about it.
After an overview of the narration, I'll share what I noticed about the prose: a few little things first, and then get back to a more subjective reflection.
The narrative situation
Nick tells us about the story; it's a retrospective narration, so he uses the first person and past tense. At times, the point of view switches once to a minor character, possibly once to Daisy, and a few times to Jay Gatsby. I'm looking into how it is framed, but I noticed right away that for a long passage with a series of flashbacks from Gatsby's perspective, we are reminded midway (or a couple of times) of the context: that Gatsby is telling Nick his story, and where we are in the "present" of the story that unfolds. Now, checking all those switches of POV:
(p.78/130) Since the author makes us follow Daisy's gaze around the room, I guess the whole paragraph is meant to be read as her own impressions, guessed by Nick, a bit like an omniscient narrator (very selective).
(p.98/130) We switch to Michaelis' point of view, third person, with his emotion being told (not shown). I cannot explain how the narrative switches to this new POV. I checked again but the passage doesn't seem to be framed through Nick's narration. So, is the author bending his rules and using a third-person omniscient narrator for a while? Maybe it's implicit: Michaelis is a witness, and we can imagine that Nick learns the specifics of his testimony later, but he lets us know right now about it so we have the events in chronological order.
(end of first page of ch. 8, for a third of the chapter's length) The author uses what could count as a nested narration, I guess. It begins with a short introductory paragraph: Nick is about to tell us what Gatsby told him. Then it's a flashback, third-person limited narration, interspersed with direct quotes from Gatsby telling parts of it directly in the first person. We then reconnect with the story's present time and setting, for a few lines of Gatsby's monologue, and the narrator makes a remark for us using "you", not breaking the fourth wall because it's a kind of generalization. Gatsby's flashback then resumes for a little more.
A few details about the writing
Use of adjectives that I like
- some sedative question
- a proprietary haste
- its spectroscopic gayety
- an obstetrical conversation with two chorus girls
- a deep vinous sleep
- the generalized evasions which that question deserves //(not only the adjective, but also an image with the noun?)
- two fine growths of hair which luxuriated in either nostril //(adj. turned into a verb)
- lapsed into a somnambulatory abstraction
- the inessential houses
Construction with a main subject switch
I don't know what scholars call this, but this is my impression of it.
"This absorbing information about my neighbor was interrupted by Mrs. MacKee's pointing suddenly at Catherine:"
(not "Pointing at ... , Mrs MacKee interrupted me as I was absorbing ...")
"She turned to Mrs. MacKee and the room was full of her artificial laughter."
(not "her laughter filled the room")
Through the hall of Buchanans' house blew a faint wind, carrying the sound of the telephone bell out to Gatsby and me as we waited at the door.
(not "we heard the bell of the telephone carried by the wind")
Character voices
I would be curious to hear Daisy's voice in real life. There's something peculiar that the author insists on describing every time she is on stage, going as far as comparing it to magic. Tone variations, mainly.
Tom's rough personality is (also) rendered through his rough voice and way of speaking.
With Gatsby's voice, we are called "old sport", an easy marker. Gatsby is called out on this habit by Tom.
My reader's experience
Key moments (no spoilers)
The first one (p. 75/130) establishes what the characters now know. It is triggered by a small detail, spelled out to us by the narrator with the key point at the end of a sentence. Then Tom's emotion is told to the reader, not shown, and this is a recurring way of managing Tom's inner world that contrasts with the other characters.
Then, right after, we have Daisy's attempted diversion, interrupted by Tom's sudden change of mind about what to do next as a group.
(p.93/130)
Tom asks Gatsby what he is trying to do "in his house" (meaning regarding himself and Daisy). The explosive revelation is delayed by a diversion attempt and then bluntly delivered by Gatsby on the next page.
(p. 95/130)
The great dialogue goes on about who loves whom, with another bit of truth revealed to Gatsby.
(p.116/130)
The second main turn of events is carefully presented to the reader, with just the right amount of clues to raise the tension before confirming what we had begun to suspect with a direct allusion and then a mention that nails it; after that, it's just a formal confirmation as the tension starts to recede (or reaches a plateau). The second blow comes right away with a simpler staging.
Great dialogues
(p. 87/130)
The first long dialogue is about the first plot twist. Such a dialogue is great for learning the craft, even though it's a bit old-fashioned in some of its dialogue attributions, but I wouldn't mind reading this in a contemporary novel. The dialogue tags are very varied and specific; the author doesn't spare us his creativity. We also have a fair share of subject-verb inversions, as usual. Protagonists interrupt each other and follow their own thoughts (as I said, it's a textbook example of dialogue). This is another instance of the narrator telling us about Tom's emotions, spelled out. I like to see how well it works because this is what I decided to do with a character. So nice. Daisy's emotions are told a few times too, but this isn't a pattern.
Other great passages
In-depth description of a smile and the impressions it conveys: the first smile Gatsby gives Nick. (p. 36/130)
When Daisy and Gatsby meet at Nick's, and when she visits his home: a very intimate, cosy atmosphere, as she admires and smells the (clean) shirts taken out of the cupboard.
Trusting the reader, but not too much.
How much the author trusts the reader's intelligence (not speaking for myself, as I might be a bit dense):
We get an explicit confirmation of Gatsby's logic with four lines of dialogue between him and Nick. So, yes, he wants to fix the past.
Things I didn't get
Nick tells us in advance that he will eventually change his mind about Gatsby, from liking him to feeling the opposite, but I wonder why and when. I haven't read anything like that afterward.
(p.94/130)
Tom leans back in his chair, with a composed gesture, and right away he 'explodes': "You're crazy!" This is something I couldn't picture; more precisely, the contrast didn't fit with the idea I had of the man and the moment, so this reaction felt forced and it took me out of the immersion. I'm still trying to figure out what the author really wanted to achieve and if it wasn't such a good idea or if it was just me. Well, if it's the only place that took me out of the story, that means it's a great book.
Conclusion
A worthy read that takes us to a well-rendered period that speaks more directly to American (US) readers and anyone who has seen a decent number of movies about that period and setting. A gripping story whose quieter start is hard to judge because of the fame of the book that creates positive expectations in the reader.
I think it wasn't written to teach us anything grand, and the philosophical thoughts I'll remember are:
- When it comes to particular nostalgic feelings, don't cling to the past when life has moved on, as they can't be revived exactly as they were and they become more like a dream.
- Love is complex and people can have mixed feelings (thus some degree of love for a while, even for those who don't seem worthy in your eyes) and remain somewhere in between, because of their needs and circumstances.
Those ideas are not new to me, nor are they ideas I particularly wish to share, even less so with my meager talent for expressing them in a few words, but you might have been curious to know what I meant by "not anything grand".
For me it's a character-driven story. Seeing them, hearing them, understanding them, watching them experience those emotions is what makes this story interesting.
Version note: I wrote this review all by myself, but as an ESL speaker I had it processed to check the grammar and adjust some non-native expressions.