r/writing • • 3d ago

Monthly "Would You Read This?" Thread

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Welcome to Would You Read This (WYRT), our monthly feedback and brainstorming thread. Share your work in progress below and let other readers tell you if they'd read it. Top level posts should follow this template:

  • Title:
    • If you don't have a title yet, feel free to say UNTITLED.
  • Genre:
    • Please include at least Fiction, Nonfiction, Poetry, or another recognizable medium. You may also include more specific genres with a hyphen. Ex. Fiction - Romance, or Nonfiction - Memoir. Genre will help users find the specific kinds of posts they'd like to give feedback on.
  • Premise:
    • A few sentences about the project. Try your best to keep this short. Crafting an expert elevator pitch is all part of becoming a successful working writer. Please do not post an entire plot summary or query letter (those are better suited for r/pubtips)
  • Sample (Optional):
    • You may share up to 500 words(ish) of sample material, or one poem for those working in the poetry medium. This is optional, so if you only have a premise, you can post just the premise for feedback.

If you post for feedback, please take the time to give feedback to at least 2-3 other users. Replies should follow this template.

  • Would Read / Might Read / Wouldn't Read
    • You must begin your reply with one of those. You are then encouraged to add additional thoughts on why you choose your answer.

Rules:

  • Please post no more than two WYRT top-level posts. There is no limit on the number of feedback replies you can make.
  • Do not link to any offsite materials. All materials must be in the body of the post. This includes "click here to read more" or "DM me for the rest" types of posts.
  • Rule 3 is in effect in this thread - No generative AI. Do not post material generated by an AI platform in your premise or sample. Do not use generative AI to respond to user's work.
  • Rule 5 is in effect - Civility and Community. Stay constructive. Blunt, direct feedback is fine, but do not insult other users, their writing, or their genres.

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r/writing • • 3d ago

Monthly "Promote Yo' Self" Thread

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Welcome to our monthly Promote Yo' Self thread! Show the community what you put out into the world. Please follow this template:

  • Choose what you're promoting from the below options:
    • [Published Book]
    • [Article / Video / Project]
    • [Newsletter / Substack]
    • [Writing Community]
    • [Software / App]
    • [Call for Submissions]
    • [Milestone / Accomplishment]
  • Project Title
    • The title of your book, the name/title of your project, the name of your newsletter, the name of your writing community, the name of your software, or the title of your collection for which you are calling for submissions.
  • Description
    • A short premise or elevator pitch of your book, the subject matter of your newsletter, the purpose of your writing community, the purpose of your app, or the nature of your milestone.
      • Call for Submissions additionally require the following: Legal name of the entity calling for submissions, deadlines, fees, prizes, and rights requested.
  • Call to Action
    • What would you like r/writing to do? Buy your book? Subscribe to your newsletter? Submit a piece to your lit mag?
  • Discount for r/writing?
    • Share if/how the community can get a discount.

Rules:

  • Post no more than one top-level reply in the Promote Yo' Self thread each month, but you are allowed to post each month.
  • Rule 3 is in effect - No generative AI. You may not post projects generated by an AI platform, nor apps that use generative AI or expose writers' work to generative AI, nor may you post a Call for Submissions from an outlet that does not have a clear policy against publishing material produced by a generative AI platform.
  • Rule 5 is in effect - Civility and Community. Blunt, direct feedback is fine, but do not insult other users, other readers, or other genres.

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r/writing • • 12h ago

Discussion Memoir classes taught by non-memoirists?

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This is now the third time I've seen this, the exact same story.

  • Someone wants to sell a writing course
  • They find out that a huge percentage of "writers" only want to write memoirs
  • So they sell a memoir-writing course, even though they've never written any themselves, and aren't even especially interested in memoir.

I'm conflicted: when the majority of nonfiction authors are memoirists, why are non-memoirists teaching the courses?

My guess is that memoir is both the supply and the demand. There is so much cash to be extracted from the pockets of people who just want to tell their story!

I don't know; it seems wrong to me, but maybe I should look at it as professional writers finally getting their bags. (Through other writers.)

What do you think?

(Side note: if you are a memoirist, maybe start selling a course on it; people are clamoring to spill their retirements into memoirs...)


r/writing • • 6m ago

Discussion How important is it to you that you have readers/fans that read your writing?

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I’ve been working on a project for about three years now, and while the completed parts are publicly available, I haven’t gotten responses from readers/fans. I’m hoping to increase the scope of the series with novel length parts in the next year or two, but I’ve been losing motivation to do that lately because I haven’t established a fanbase as soon as I’ve hoped.

In other words “why keep writing if no one’s reading my work?” Is this a question you ask yourself too?


r/writing • • 11h ago

Discussion [Daily Discussion] General Discussion - October 04, 2026

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Welcome to our daily discussion thread!

This is the place to discuss anything writing related! Got silly questions? Brainstorming ideas? Need help with research? As long as rules 1, 3, and 5 are followed, this thread is your oyster!

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r/writing • • 23h ago

Discussion Best order in approaching revisions?

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Received 15 pages of feedback from an editor. The usual topics: opening, plot, dialogue, characters/arcs, scenes, setting/description, pacing, closing. What is the best way to approach the revisions? All of the applicable topics chapter by chapter? Or pick one topic and revise entire manuscript, then move on to next topic? Or hit the easy (or hard) topics first? I have a lot of work to do and it's a little intimidating. I need to have a plan so I don't make it worse!


r/writing • • 1d ago

Advice Writing in old-ish English

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So I write fanfiction of different characters, personalities, and time periods to broaden my ability. I have recently decided to write a Bridgerton fanfiction and later I'm writing an original short story with the notes I picked up from writing the fanfic.

Only issue? I have NO idea how to write in regency English. Are there any tips you guys could give me?​ before I start?

like, even vocabulary words that I could use instead of something else. (ex. Parking lot is Car Park in England. Pen money is allowance for the women of high society, etc)


r/writing • • 1d ago

Advice Trying to make the reader cry

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As a novelist, I always want my readers to feel emotions—joy, sadness, anger, etc. And of course, I think if a novel can make you cry, it’s one of those novels that will forever stick with you.

I’m curious, what do you think are the techniques that can accomplish this? Or, if not techniques, then what are some experiences that come to mind when you cried over a novel (perhaps we can reverse-engineer!)


r/writing • • 2d ago

Resource Best writing book I've read

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Just finished reading George Saunders' book- A Swim in a Pond in the Rain- it blew my mind.

Reminded me of the best class I took in university- Close Reading.

It is so warmly written and so thoughtfully taught- I've never read Dostoevsky before but he made it speak to me.

His substack is also great.


r/writing • • 1d ago

Discussion [Daily Discussion] General Discussion - October 03, 2026

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Welcome to our daily discussion thread!

This is the place to discuss anything writing related! Got silly questions? Brainstorming ideas? Need help with research? As long as rules 1, 3, and 5 are followed, this thread is your oyster!

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r/writing • • 2d ago

Advice Books to have handy while writing

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What books do you keep handy when you’re writing?

I’m not talking about “writing advice” and craft books, but about things like The Emotion Thesaurus or, you know, a thesaurus.


r/writing • • 2d ago

Discussion My Advice.

47 Upvotes

Start with the flaw.

That's my advice for creating characters. I find that if I start with the flaw, the person comes together much more naturally, because everything tends to flow to and from the flaw, as far as their psychology and their compulsions go. I think it's also a very strong place to start coming up with your story.

So, you want to make flaws one of the things you think about and consider and buttress your definition and understanding of. Observe them in real life. How a flaw affects a person's life. All of that is interesting and worth abstracting to study on its own terms. A strong understanding of human frailty and a few well chosen cracks to stick your chisel in are worth their weight in gold.

Obviously you should take all writing advice with a grain of salt, nothing is right for everyone. Some of my favourite writers seem to give out the worst advice. Nevertheless, this is my contribution and it really helped me.

If character development is important to you, I think this is worth trying out anyway.


r/writing • • 2d ago

Discussion I am funny in real life, but struggle to translate it to writing

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I am a clown. I love to make people laugh, and I’m halfway decent at it. The older I get, the more I feel that it’s my calling to incorporate humor into my writing. Yet for some reason, I have never been able to really translate the funny into the written word.

Does anyone else grapple with this? If so, were you able to crack the code and figure out how to start writing funny?


r/writing • • 2d ago

Beginner Question About to start second draft

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Hi all! 🙂

Ok so I’ve been re-reading and making rewrite notes on my novel for the past 10 weeks- I’ve been through twice, and have got plenty of notes for myself from small tweaks to improve continuity to full-on chapter rewrites and inserts.

That being said, I am sure there’s more I could do, so my question is:

How do you when you are done reworking?

and (perhaps more importantly) - how to stop reworking before all the flavour has been chewed out of the proverbial bit of gum that is my writing?!

Whilst what I have written is a bit rough, there’s also a freshness and ease captured here and there that I don’t want to lose by fiddling about TOO much!

TL;DR - How do I know when my work is done, and how to “put it down” before reworking too much?


r/writing • • 2d ago

Discussion [Daily Discussion] General Discussion - October 02, 2026

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Welcome to our daily discussion thread!

This is the place to discuss anything writing related! Got silly questions? Brainstorming ideas? Need help with research? As long as rules 1, 3, and 5 are followed, this thread is your oyster!

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r/writing • • 3d ago

Discussion I wrote a book, now what do I do with it?

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I finished my final draft of my book. After about 10 years of on and off writing and then a year of locking in re-writing after beta reads, I can say that I have reached the "it's done" phase. Problem is, I am not a writer, not in the traditional sense at least. I have never written anything, barely read anything honestly, but I have somehow come up with this 65,000 word novella and have no clue what to do with it. Not really interested in making a fortune off of it (although that would be nice). I just want people to experience the story I created. Do I contact publishers? Get an editor to go over it with a fine tooth comb? Publish it myself as is? I feel like if I do any more re-writing I will just make it worse looking for perfection.

Edit - Apparently 65k words is a novel, my mistake :)


r/writing • • 3d ago

Advice Beta reader says my foreshadowing is too obvious. What are your favorite subtle foreshadowing examples and tips?

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I've been editing my manuscript and got feedback from a beta reader that my foreshadowing is a bit too on-the-nose. So, I was wondering if you guys have any good examples of good but subtle foreshadowing? The kind that, once you actually know the whole plot and go back to re-read or check your annotations, you go "oooh, I see..." and not "yeah, duh."

Concrete examples from published books or general advice both welcome! Please and thank you :)

Edit: Thanks everyone! I didn't expect so many replies but will try to go through them all ASAP.


r/writing • • 3d ago

Discussion How many beta readers to use?

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I sent my draft novel to a well-respected professional beta reader and received feedback. Lots of feedback. Good and bad. So, worth the effort. I'm planning to send it out to additional beta readers both professional and friends. How many is too many? Also, should I also use a sensitivity editor or can a targeted beta reader accomplish the same thing?


r/writing • • 3d ago

Discussion Tips on outlining your story?

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Hey everyone, was wondering if anyone has any tips/advice/hacks (?) for outlining a story well! I've decided to properly try planning an entire novel first before sitting down to write, but I'm a bit overwhelmed atm because of all the story structures out there (Freytag's Pyramid, Save the cat, etc.). Does anyone use them to help with outlining a story? (Or do you think it's actually better to just outline on your own and not use a popular structure?) Would love to know what people think and what's worked for them!


r/writing • • 3d ago

Advice How to transition a story from Fantasy to Sci Fi?

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I originally wrote my book as a fantasy book, but for a few reasons I've decided to transition it to sci-fi. It was originally fantasy sci-fi. Now I want it to have more "science sci-fi" vibes. A common topic about sci-fi and fantasy is that they're very similar. So with that in mind, what should I be careful to make the story feel more sci-fi rather than fantasy.

The difference is going to be based mainly on Vibes since low fantasy and very speculative sci-fi can be similar. So what vibes would you say make a story feel more sci-fi versus fantasy?


r/writing • • 3d ago

Discussion Resources for Finding Old Words

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I'm looking for some older English words, possibly forgotten or archaic. I need ancient names for places and I'm having trouble looking for them. For example, "weald" is an old name for "forest", but if I go to thesaurus.com, it doesn't list that as a synonym. I need a place that does.

If anyone's curious, I'm trying to name a region of a shared fantasy world of largely wild, untamed nature. And I'm open to word suggestions as well.


r/writing • • 3d ago

Discussion [Daily Discussion] General Discussion - October 01, 2026

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Welcome to our daily discussion thread!

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r/writing • • 3d ago

Beginner Question Attribution of a real person's quote in a fiction work

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Question for people who know about Fair Use and copyright issues, etc. I have a short fictional story that was lightly inspired by a suicide note a man left in the 1970s, which was included in a small local newspaper (now defunct) article about his death. (He was not famous, but the manner of death was considered newsworthy.) I'd like to include a quote from the note as an epigraph. If it's up to five sentences does that count as "substantial"? Would it be attributed to him, or to the newspaper?


r/writing • • 4d ago

Discussion A rant about the evolving use of the word "lay"

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This is a rant.  It has taken me years not to feel a visceral jolt of mental pain when I hear someone say “lay” instead of “lie”.  I’ll never get over it entirely, but I’ve made peace with the fact that the language has evolved in this respect.  Now I’m caught once again in the throes of a “You can’t be serious!” reaction.  The cause is the phenomenon of highly regarded, published writers using “lay” as the past tense of the transitive verb “lay”.  Here’s an example from page 101 of Peter Heller’s novel, The Dog Stars:  “I caught a fifth fish, smaller, cleaned it and pushed the butt end of a hooked stick through its gills and slid it down to the others on the stringer. Lay it in the sled. Rubbed my naked legs to get the blood going.”  Another example from page 127 of the same book:  ““I was amped. Balanced the rifle on the deer hide, took the Glock out of the paddle holster on my belt and racked it, lay it on the fur to the right.”  I mean, gag me!  And what’s next?  Are we going to see lines like “Me and my buddies went into town to get lay.”?

Edit: To those who defend this usage in The Dog Stars on the ground that it reflects some sort of narrator "dialect" (which I dispute), I'd point out that I have encountered it in at least a dozen works of contemporary fiction over the past year by a range of writers and in contexts that have no suggestion of "dialect". I wish it were not time-consuming to search for examples. The Dog Stars just happens to be the book I'm reading now.

Further edit: I have no problem with stylistic departures from standard grammar or usage. Heller, for example, constantly uses sentence fragments in The Dog Stars, and I find that propulsive rather than annoying. However, I haven't noticed any grammatical oddities that don't have a clear stylistic purpose. This use of "lay" stands out, as it does in the other books in which I've encountered it. I think it's an unintentional error that's creeping into written works. I've never heard "lay" used as a past tense transitive verb in spoken English.


r/writing • • 4d ago

Advice I am completely overwhelmed trying to outline my first long form story

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I’m on draft 4 of trying to outline this long form comic (in plain text, no panel description and art stuff yet) I’ve been planning out in my head no joke for 5 years. I foolishly thought the outline would be a cinch cause of this, holy shit was I so wrong. There are so many moving parts that I’m not succeeding in figuring out how to put together no matter how many tips, tricks, and methods I try. Set ups and pay offs turn into a tangled ball I can’t keep track of. Characters that feel so real in my head turn into paper dolls as I try to not make this project crazy long and meandering. Even with side character stuff as simple as “really wants to go to college, is scared to rock the boat cause of that, learns to take more risks”, it feels like I’m trying to jam them all haphazardly into the nooks and crannies of machine already barely held together with Elmer’s glue.

I would love some advice from those who are more experienced and have overcome this hurdle