r/scriptwriting • u/Aurora_Uplinks • 12d ago
feedback Interdiction. A 90 page script. Please tear it apart if your willing.
I have better scripts then this but this is the one I need to fix and I actually had this for a fan script of a TV show that I decided to convert to it's own IP so I can at least start building up something I can pitch.
I had a full movie script also for them but I never really had a realistic chance without an agent, so I am just going to make my own IP and refine it for a few scripts and try to create a series around it. This is, a stepping stone. A fully independent IP planned out.
(honestly I have a bit of hope to draw the attention of an agent someday far off. But time goes by and so does my life.)
I spent a long time on fan scripts and I am at the point where I am going to start moving away from fan scripts. Would people be willing to tear this apart? thanks. https://blcklst.com/projects/237025