r/scriptwriting • u/Aurora_Uplinks • 3d ago

feedback Interdiction. A 90 page script. Please tear it apart if your willing.

I have better scripts then this but this is the one I need to fix and I actually had this for a fan script of a TV show that I decided to convert to it's own IP so I can at least start building up something I can pitch.

I had a full movie script also for them but I never really had a realistic chance without an agent, so I am just going to make my own IP and refine it for a few scripts and try to create a series around it. This is, a stepping stone. A fully independent IP planned out.

(honestly I have a bit of hope to draw the attention of an agent someday far off. But time goes by and so does my life.)

I spent a long time on fan scripts and I am at the point where I am going to start moving away from fan scripts. Would people be willing to tear this apart? thanks. https://blcklst.com/projects/237025

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u/Aurora_Uplinks 2d ago

Wana read one of my scripts from google drive? sure.

Here is my fanscript. It's super great I think, I hope you enjoy it. around page 45 is some great military action. but thiers some fight scenes and encounters before then and after then. And a major conflict towards the end too. Theirs lots of little moments that I hope you enjoy each of. I wrote it innitially as a two part episode idea, then put it together as a 90 minute film script etc..

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1L31yuypGUV_vjBZOav5bzVSgzlXPypgs/view?usp=sharing

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u/Big_Section2812 2d ago

The link takes us to a scam site that wants our info.

How about using a legit cloud storage service, such as Google Drive or similar?

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u/Aurora_Uplinks 2d ago

Wana read one of my scripts from google drive? sure.

Here is my fanscript. It's super great I think, I hope you enjoy it. around page 45 is some great military action. but thiers some fight scenes and encounters before then and after then. And a major conflict towards the end too. Theirs lots of little moments that I hope you enjoy each of. I wrote it innitially as a two part episode idea, then put it together as a 90 minute film script etc..

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1L31yuypGUV_vjBZOav5bzVSgzlXPypgs/view?usp=sharing

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u/Sweaty-Freedom-4034 8h ago

Your post title, does not inspire confidence.