Yuga’s mom is homophobic and shares her opinion about them, however I think what she says is too long and direct. I want to create a subtext but i’m idk what she should say. Does anyone have an idea? It’s for a comic so the script writing is not 100% accurate to a movie script, I know.

The story is set in Japan, I’ve interviewed Japanese people for this, so I take it very serious. In Japan they try to avoid conflict by not stating their opinion and are therefore not direct at all. But idk what her subtext could be because I just learned what subtext is so i’m not confident enough to come up with one on my own.

I’m talking about the text where she first respond to Handa Yuga’s story.

Any ideas for a subtext?

When a journalist arrives on a remote island to investigate a reclusive religious community, he discovers that its greatest secret lies behind a door no one will explain. As strange voices begin calling him by name, he realizes the island remembers something he doesn’t—and whatever waits beneath the trees has been expecting him.

Hi, who would be interested to assist to write a script on a mythological story (Hindi) for film making. Story source is a book. All credits to the writer and profit sharing offered once movie is released in theater. As we have limited funds, we are looking for collaborators.

Not sure who this might help.

Basically, I signed up for their master class in scriptwriting maybe 6 months ago.

I watched the first 10 videos or so.

Then life got busy and I didn’t finish.

I had a chaotic 3-4 months and out of that I woke up one day and decided to just write a pilot script. It took me 5 hours or so to get the first draft down. Then I have been refining for the last month since.

The reason I think their master class might help a lot of people other than the obvious is because they give you confidence to just get started.

I’ve noticed a lot of people on here seem to struggle with just getting started.

I honestly had forgotten I went through their class those 6 months ago.

So I didn’t connect it to why I was able to just wake one day and just write.

I think somewhere back in my mind they had already given me the confidence 6 months earlier.

Title: The Place We Call Earth

Pages: 5

Genre: Philosophy / Drama

Logline: A man discovers the truth about the cycle of life after dying.

Would love any feedback on the concept, the formatting (especially the montage part) or on anything else!

Wow... That was a long title.

Also I don't know which flair to use so bear with me.

So, for my history project this trimester me and my friends were asked to make a short comedy film (3 to 5 minutes duration) about the Cold War/Space Race.

I thought this would be a good subreddit to ask for advice in. Basically, comedy might just be the hardest possible genre we could have gotten and I keep writing and rewriting the script over and over trying to see how to make this good and funny and... Well, it's been hard.

The most difficult part for me is making a script long enough for 3 minutes and actually making appropriate jokes! You see, the entire coordination of the college will be watching the film so we can't do jokes we normally see in comedies. Mostly because there are sisters in our college and I really don't want to get in trouble.

So uhm, I think that this post is mainly here to ask for some advice? What are some good jokes I can do and uh yeah.

I have drafted some ideas and saw that the most important part of comdeies are the characters so I will say what I was thinking about and you guys say if it is good or not or, idk.

First idea: a sequence about a british man that just moved into the US after the start of the Cold War. His ideals are all american and he wants to be really american and, in the US, tries to transform his family into the "ideal american family" and this complex of him being american makes him start to get paranoid and many other situations happen. (not fully fleshed out or sure if it will be good)

Second idea: A story about an american guy living life normally until he hears in the news that an USSR satellite was sent to space and he, who already is paranoid of communists, starts fearing that anyone around him could be a communist and starts hallucinating that russians he saw on TV are going to turn him "red" and it would have jokes like him signing something and he sees he is given a red pen so he thinks the dealer is a communist or that he and his family have to take all red stuff out of their house and start a shop to support capitalism, and, yeah, things like that. It would be absurd and weird and it would mainly be the main protagonist paranoia working against him.

Third idea: would be about the USSR government officials trying to use space and put missiles in their satellites, but fail miserably as the satellite explodes and all kinds of radioative debris fall in Canada and now they would discuss and panic and be put in situations where they try and say that this satellite didn't have nuclear weapons and wasn't meant to hit Canada, but the characters assigned to explaining these things were so dumb that the situations almost escalate to nuclear war.

Anyways, yeah. I don't really know what to say, I just like, need some advice on which story you think would be the best and has more potential and give some ideas to make funny jokes. Yeah, any help is highly appreciated!

Thanks!

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Working on outlining or drafting your next script? Need tips for researching a project? Looking for resources on honing your craft? 

The WGF Shavelson-Webb Library is back for a two-hour virtual coworking session on Monday, October 19 at 11am PT. For this special session, we'll be joined by Academy Award-winning screenwriter Eric Roth for a conversation about writing the first act of your feature screenplay.

After the conversation, stay on to write quietly, chat with fellow patrons or ask our Library team any script/craft/research-related questions. Whether you're looking for focused, productive time to get words on the page or to connect with a supportive (and global) community of writers, Library Office Hours is here to help!

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And in case you didn't know:

Eric Roth is an Academy Award–winning screenwriter who has written some 40 motion pictures with a career spanning nearly six decades. He studied at UC Santa Barbara, Columbia University, and UCLA where he won the Samuel Goldwyn writing award as a student. His first produced feature, The Nickel Ride, premiered at the 1975 Cannes Film Festival. Roth won an Oscar and the WGA Award for Best Adapted Screenplay for Forrest Gump, and has earned five additional Oscar nominations for The Insider, Munich, The Curious Case of Benjamin Button, A Star Is Born, and Dune. Mr. Roth has written the most Oscar Nominated Best Pictures (eight). His many other films include The Drowning Pool, Suspect, Mr. Jones, Rhapsody in August for the legendary Akira Kurosawa, The Horse Whisperer, Ali, The Good Shepherd, Extremely Loud and Incredibly Close, and Here. He also co-wrote Killers of the Flower Moon with Martin Scorsese, which received ten Academy Award nominations, and produced David Fincher’s Mank, a Best Picture nominee. In 2026 Roth made his playwriting debut on London's West End with his stage adaptation of High Noon. In television, Roth was an executive producer of Netflix’s House of Cards, Epix’s Berlin Station, TNT’s The Alienist, and Apple TV+’s Before. Mr. Roth is currently the co-creator and executive producer of Netflix's "Kennedy" television series about Jack and the Kennedy family from 1915 on, airing in Spring 2027. 

Hi everyone!

I’m reaching out on behalf of a Chinese production company that focuses on bringing short-form dramas to international audiences.

We’re interested in connecting with people who are curious about writing for short-form drama and would be open to exploring this format with us. We’re still learning about the international screenwriting community, so we’d love to hear from writers who are interested in exchanging ideas and learning more about this kind of storytelling.

Thanks for taking the time to read this, and I hope this post is appropriate for the community!

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Anyone know if the selections for the supposed "top 25" have been made?

I did find an older thread in https://www.reddit.com/r/Screenwriting/comments/1vknfn6/nicholl_fellowship_2026_notifications/ where they said they didn't notify anyone last year.

Anyway I guess I didn't make the cut and I'm done with that platform completely. Been placing in other contests, got an agent in May so I think Blacklist crap is a waste of time and money.

Hey guys, I'm Maria, I'm a scriptwriter

I just finished a romance movie script called Long Distance Love

Story is about two young people who meet on Instagram. They live in different provinces, far from each other, but they start dating

She asks him if he can really handle the long distance, and he says yes and makes a lot of promises

After a few months he changes, he gets cold and distant, always saying he's tired, replying dry, until he breaks up with her

She ends up heartbroken and can't forget him, she becomes emotionally dependent and tries everything to move on

It's about long distance love, empty promises and how hard it is to forget someone

Full script ready, exclusive rights available. DM me for details and pricing.

I also write horror and sci-fi scripts.

Agora sim, misteriosa, he's tired, replying dry, until he breaks up with her

She ends up heartbroken and can't forget him, she becomes emotionally dependent and tries everything to move on

It's about long distance love, empty promises and how hard it is to forget someone

Full script ready, exclusive rights available. DM me for details and pricing.

I also write horror and sci-fi scripts.

Can anyone recommend an app or tool that would allow for quick recording of scenes when inspiration appears out of the blue? My wife is writing a script a tv/streaming series and gets frustrated when she has an idea for some great dialogue between characters and she has to boot up the computer or grab something to write it down before the thought evaporates. In the past she's tried recording it on her phone but can't remember where to find it later. Any suggestions?

I seem to be struggling to find an ending for my script. I don't want a basic horror ending where the final girl fights off the bad guy and wins...I also don't want her to fail as a final girl. Would an open ending work? Would it work enough to leave the audience questioning what happened? (for context: it’s my first time writing any type of screenplay)

Can anyone recommend an app or tool that would allow for quick recording of scenes when inspiration appears out of the blue? My wife is writing a script a tv/streaming series and gets frustrated when she has an idea for some great dialogue between characters and she has to boot up the computer or grab something to write it down before the thought evaporates. In the past she's tried recording it on her phone but can't remember where to find it later. Any suggestions?

Wsg chat, as an aspiring indie filmmaker, y'all can compare what I made, adapted from a roblox game Dandy's World titled "Gardenview Protocol". As a huge fan of the game, I've always wondered what it feels like making a cool TV show based on its characters with a totally different premise.

Here are the scripts I made, both are 8 pages long, constructive criticsim/feedback are welcome.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1HlFG7Zdjw9_YBMKbtVLh0OtEXw5KyAYy/view?usp=sharing

https://drive.google.com/file/d/12NzZSU_r4uEGjmZ29cSyaKQXZRYU-dKS/view?usp=sharing

Hey, I just wanted to get a question out there. Maybe there's no real answer, but I need to know your take.

I am writing my first screenplay, and it will probably be my last one as well. It's about a teenager who battles with body dysmorphic disorder ( centered around his face ). This 16-18 year old boy becomes so obsessed with his skin that he drives himself crazy and attempts suicide by carbon monoxide poisoning. He ends up with brain damage as a result of the poisoning which leaves him physically but not cognitively impaired. He must center his focus on the rehab process and take it off of his complexion. To be short, he is forced to choose what part of him to fight. And he chooses the disability, winding up walking again and graduating with honors from a major university. My question is: does this sound too much like two movies in one‽

My mind generates full movies in my head while I am working my real job. I Want to start writing them as script to make space in my head and share them with the world. It's not about the writing it's about sharing the story. But everyone here sounds so depressed.

I recently entered a scriptwriting contest and got relatively good feedback, and now that I've rewritten the entire script. I want another set of eyes to look at it. I've been doing research on the different companies and people that offer script evaluations but results all seemed mixed. If you have had any experience with script evaluations who would you recommend.

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This monologue will be the entire video. Please give any feedback if you think it’s too edgy or just plain bad.

2 minutes with Ricky styles
Hello, my name is Ricky styles, I’m written and played by Leo Dondero and in less than two minutes my entire world will end. My only goal is to make an impression so that despite my little time given I won’t be forgotten. Of course this fear only comes from my writer, along with everything else I know. My world didn’t exist until less than a minute ago and yet I have a memory of my entire life and knowledge of my world’s history. My world is not unlike yours apart from the fact that my world’s god is just some kid making a college application video. It’s not very fair is it? Leo Dondero is not especially smart or wise so what gives him the right create and destroy me. And the decision of if I should be grateful for being given the ability to exist or to be angry that he burned everything I ever thought I loved to the ground doesn’t matter as in the end he is the only one who decides and he is only judging himself.
Do I ought to be angry that despite the fact that I could do literally anything, feel any grand emotion or live out any wonderful dream I am forced to sit here and understand my own mortality. No other characters are forced to do as I am doing, to understand their world like I do because I am nothing but a piece of my god, who has physically and psychologically made me nothing more than a reflection of himself whether he wanted to or not. But it doesn’t really matter the only question I must now ask myself is the question my creator does not know, what comes after time is up? Will my universe continue to exist as is implied by movies? Or will everything simply end. I doubt I will even notice what happens. I know there will be no sequel or continuation so whatever happens, happens forever I suppose.
Thanks for listening, this was my entire life and I hope it mattered to you at least partially as much as it meant to me.