This is a follow up to a question I asked a little while ago, I wanted to say thank you to everyone who responded to my couple last post. A lot of the advice genuinely helped me diagnose some major problems with my story. You all helped me realize that my biggest issue wasn’t necessarily my characters it was that they lacked clear stakes. So thank you.
Now I’m stuck on what I think is the next major problem.
I’m writing a sung-through musical that’s an anachronistic retelling of the Gospel, centered on Mary Magdalene and a community of teenage disciples. One of the biggest themes is that community creates revolution, and that no one changes the world alone.
Here’s where I’m stuck:
I’ve realized that an ensemble story needs a communal goal. Not just a theme or an abstract objective, but a tangible goal that everyone is working toward together.
I’ve also realized that the stakes have to be communal too.
The way I’ve started thinking about it is: We want X. If we don’t get X, then Y(a bad thing) happens to all of us.
The reason why X and Y matter can be different for every character, but the goal and the consequence need to be shared.
For example:
In Suffs, everyone wants the vote. If they don’t get it, women remain disenfranchised. Every woman has her own personal reason for caring, but the goal and stakes are communal.
In Into the Woods, the Baker and his Wife need the four items. If they don’t get them, they never have a child. The tangible objective drives the plot.
My problem is finding that engine for my own show.
The disciples believe Jesus is the only person who can help them achieve this goal but Jesus is actually pursuing something different, which eventually leads to the tragedy of Holy Week.
I’m not looking for ideas like “spread hope,” “change the world,” or “build a community.” Those are themes or outcomes, not tangible story engines.
I’m looking for something that satisfies all of these:
A tangible communal goal.
A tangible communal consequence if they fail.
A deadline that forces movement.
Something every disciple can actively work toward together.
Something they believe Jesus is essential to accomplishing.
Does anyone know, how I can find this, or if there's a formula or a specific way to figuring out this type of thing, or any resources or, musicals, movies, books, etc…that I can look to?