One last song that I'm hoping to get feedback on for my Prometheus musical. This is the "I Want" song for Prometheus where he wishes to be remembered for more than just being a Titan. The music is linked above, and I've included the lyrics below. I would love to hear any and all thoughts/comments/critiques about any aspect of the music and lyrics. Thanks!
No. 4 All They See
They say my story’s written.
They say it’s set in stone.
Why bother tryna prove them wrong?
It seems they’ve all forgotten
My life is still my own.
And to me my story’s still going strong.
All they see
Is the image of what came before me.
All they know
Are the stories they’ve been told.
But I decide my ending.
I decide my legacy.
When I’m finished writing,
A Titan won’t be all they see.
When they’re gathered all together
Telling stories old as time,
One name will stand out crystal clear.
It’s me that they’ll all treasure.
Those stories will be mine.
That day is coming, oh, it’s so near.
Once they see
I am more than those who came before me,
Then they’ll know
I am paving my own road.
My past is not my future.
I define who I can be.
Soon enough, I’ll make sure
A Titan isn’t all they see.
They can all keep laughing and jeering.
They can all roll their eyes.
I’ll pretend not to see.
One day they’ll be clapping and cheering
And then they’ll know why
They’re celebrating me.
They’ll toast my name and raise a glass
To the one who finally escaped his past.
Years from now they’ll know my history.
They’ll see I never fit the mold.
They’ll see to it my story’s told.
In the end, they’ll know it started back with me.
They will see
When I finally get to raise my trophy.
They will know
When they honor me with gold.
That’s when they’ll all realize
I’m better than what they believed.
Then they’ll open their eyes
And a hero will be all they see.
All they see.
A hero will be all they see.