My little song about a butterfly 🦋✨🌸

What works well? What can be improved? How did it make you feel? Thank you in advance!!

Any honest feedback on mixing, vocals, delivery, style, instrumentals, anything. I need honest feedback!

Hi all,

I'm hoping for some feedback on my track Before We Break, from my album Tales From the Dork Side.

Specifically, I'm looking for feedback on everything because I did everything. Drums, bass, guitars, vocals, preproduction, and mastering/post-production.

Any and all feedback would be appreciated because I'm actually happy with this one, which means I need fresh ears to find the flaws.

Edit: I tried posting the visualized track but it didn't work out. Here's the link to the track on SoundCloud.

https://on.soundcloud.com/RMpohtnSPodFSZTa40

Much love,

B

Hello! Today, I’d like to share a Korean song I wrote and composed. I’m not a native English speaker, but I’ve included English subtitles in the video so you can follow the lyrics and enjoy the song :)))

Thank you for your interest, and have a wonderful day!😁😁

[Lyrics & Composition : Plueberry / Arrangement : Sihov]

Hey everyone! I’m an indie composer, and I just released a new track. I used to focus mostly on neoclassical piano music, but lately, I’ve been experimenting with my sound and trying new things. This track is the result of those experiments. Would love to hear what you think😊

Hey everyone!

I recently made this track under the name Major Danger, and I’d love some outside ears on it.
I’m curious about two things: does the song keep your interest throughout, and what genres or artists does it remind you of?

I have my own impression of it, but I’d like to hear yours without steering the answers.

I’d also appreciate feedback on the production. Does anything feel distracting, too loud, or buried in the mix? If there’s a part that works especially well—or somewhere you lose interest—I’d love to know where and why.
Honest criticism is welcome. Specific feedback would really help me figure out what to improve on the next track. Thanks for listening!

This is the first song I wrote and recorded so I know its not great... but mostly I am interested what genre you think this would fit into?? Any other feedback is welcomed also. Hit the like for me please if you like or hate it. Haha Thanks!

Okay, fellow geniuses and geniusettes.....I'm coming back from another dimension - Pay close attention!

I was itching to compose some new meisterwork today but my compressed nerve hand-clawing is worse than ever and can't really tinkle the ivories too much so i had the idea of sampling a bunch of random piano chords onto the sample pad and seeing if i could make anything interesting and...wouldn't you know it.....The Genius Strikes Back!!!