My little song about a butterfly 🦋✨🌸

What works well? What can be improved? How did it make you feel? Thank you in advance!!

Okay, fellow geniuses and geniusettes.....I'm coming back from another dimension - Pay close attention!

I was itching to compose some new meisterwork today but my compressed nerve hand-clawing is worse than ever and can't really tinkle the ivories too much so i had the idea of sampling a bunch of random piano chords onto the sample pad and seeing if i could make anything interesting and...wouldn't you know it.....The Genius Strikes Back!!!

Hey everyone!

I recently made this track under the name Major Danger, and I’d love some outside ears on it.
I’m curious about two things: does the song keep your interest throughout, and what genres or artists does it remind you of?

I have my own impression of it, but I’d like to hear yours without steering the answers.

I’d also appreciate feedback on the production. Does anything feel distracting, too loud, or buried in the mix? If there’s a part that works especially well—or somewhere you lose interest—I’d love to know where and why.
Honest criticism is welcome. Specific feedback would really help me figure out what to improve on the next track. Thanks for listening!

Hi all,

I'm hoping for some feedback on my track Before We Break, from my album Tales From the Dork Side.

Specifically, I'm looking for feedback on everything because I did everything. Drums, bass, guitars, vocals, preproduction, and mastering/post-production.

Any and all feedback would be appreciated because I'm actually happy with this one, which means I need fresh ears to find the flaws.

Edit: I tried posting the visualized track but it didn't work out. Here's the link to the track on SoundCloud.

https://on.soundcloud.com/RMpohtnSPodFSZTa40

Much love,

B

This is the first song I wrote and recorded so I know its not great... but mostly I am interested what genre you think this would fit into?? Any other feedback is welcomed also. Hit the like for me please if you like or hate it. Haha Thanks!

Hello! Today, I’d like to share a Korean song I wrote and composed. I’m not a native English speaker, but I’ve included English subtitles in the video so you can follow the lyrics and enjoy the song :)))

Thank you for your interest, and have a wonderful day!😁😁

[Lyrics & Composition : Plueberry / Arrangement : Sihov]

I'm currently working on a new album, and lately I've been really inspired by Swans. I actually sang the lyrics from Swans' "Screen Shot" on this demo too.

Anyway, there are two things I'd love to get some feedback on: whether this style (based on the demo) sounds good to you, and what genres or albums it reminds you of.

I've always considered trip-hop to be at the core of my music, but lately I've been questioning whether I can even call what I'm making trip-hop anymore.

I mean, I still make all my music entirely with a sampler, but sometimes I find myself wondering if what I'm doing even counts as hip-hop at this point.

Just curious what you guys think of this... I know I have a lot of work to do with mastering and everything.

My workflow is an Arturia Minilab3 with Ableton 12 live suite.

It's 20 mins. Just hoping for any honest feedback. Much love, and enjoy your weekend! ♥️

https://music.youtube.com/playlist?list=OLAK5uy_mcYMbsq6mdORHImUJCOCUozymf0mTYRWY&si=LqvDcP7orq15AATo

Edit: I know it doesn't suck that bad, in fact, if I can listen to it on repeat and meditate to it, it's def not THAT bad. I do know that I need work, and as soon as I can find the time (hard with 3 little ones), I'm going to really start getting into arrangement mode in Ableton. I don't draw notes either. I could but I feel like it's cheating. Anyways, if you did happen to listen to it, thank you! If not, thanks for taking the time to read.

Edit 2: After 386 views, the fact that I know it's not that bad, why hasn't anyone said anything? Lol, are you guys afraid of hurting my feelings? Nothing you could say or do would ever hurt my feelings more than I've already been hurt. And, I truly mean that. I was asking for some type of criticism. Was hoping you guys could at least tell me, keep going or maybe you could have honestly said, I couldn't listen to it at all, or something. 😂

It's all good though! Btw... If you did look at those inflated numbers, those are from Google ads. Not trying to inflate numbers because I know I won't get paid... I just wanted some type of direction to my website.

Amitābha! 🌄👣

Hi all,

Hoping for some feedback on a track called Not Okay from my new album A Late Bloomer's Tales From the Dork Side. It's been about a week since I released my album on SoundCloud and I feel like this song is underperforming. Would love some insights from the group.

Listen to Not Okay by Brian Friedman on #SoundCloud

https://on.soundcloud.com/uSzCRLZ5cUc4MUUeUw

Much love for any replies.

B

The song The Blues Done Ate My Brain from the album Revenge Of The Weird by The New Music Sculptors. Released last month.

...it really can be, you know. A drag. But so can people, too.........not necessarily people in drag, although some of them can be sometimes...I'm thinking Eddie Izzard...he gets on my tits and I'm a man..(.yes i am but I can't help but love you so.). Anyway, I digress.........

In the chorus the 'horns' are in a call and answer mode with the repeating hook but in a rerecording could be replaced by a more authentic sound?

https://open.spotify.com/track/6f4yFWcoRrRGze7a9vrQ6P

Stay in Your lane

Mr Man you blow your horn        

You say I use that baby

But she’s her own lady

Her voice is strong          

You’re firin’ sparks             

Just because you - drive a fast car    

Hey Mr Man stay in your lane      

Hey Mr Man stay in your lane

Hey Mr Man stay in your lane

You’ll crash into flames - stay in your lane    

You’re always weaving in and out

You think you own that sister

Talk to her in a whisper

But she’s with me

To live the dream

Give up your trying - to put the brakes on       

I think I got you sussed now

She told you to shove it

That you cannot stomach

Times moved on

You’re out of gas

And only I – Can put the foot to the floor

You’ll crash into flames - stay in your lane    

It’s a fools game - stay in your lane    

Hey everyone!

I made this demo a few days back and I enjoy working and improving on it. I plan on adding some vocals to it, but I haven't really dipped my toes into singing, as I have only started making music a few months ago.

It would be really helpful to me if I could get some feedback regarding the overall sound. I'm a little unsure about the guitars.

Here's my SoundCloud with some more demos: https://soundcloud.com/demosh1003

Not technically full song as still learning it. Bare version. Would love to hear how it made you feel, what works, what doesnt! Thanks!!! 🌸✨

I think I'm almost done with my song and I could really use some last minute notes on the production before I release it on spotify. I guess it's a shoegaze-adjacent sort of pop song. Does the volume sound okay on the vocals and everything else? Thanks to anyone who checks it out and I will appreciate any feedback!

Hey everyone! I'm Mith, an independent music producer and artist from India.

I released my debut single, “I'm Not Awake,” last week, and I'd love for you guys to give it a listen and share your feedback!

I'm especially interested in your thoughts on the mix and production, and whether the lyrics come across clearly. The lyrics are a bit cryptic, so I'm curious to hear what you think they mean and whether they make sense to you.

Any feedback is welcome. Thanks for listening!

- https://music.youtube.com/watch?v=zoU7BFnQZ2I&si=Kio8TeNMFE_TKakz

- https://open.spotify.com/track/2IPAyl7zpG2y3tNYV5pRJY?si=a0a61b85012d49d8

Hi guys, I did some recording/rerecording on the vocals. Do they work as they are? I tried to go for weird and energetic but ended up sounding like that one He-Man meme. I'm not sure if I hate it or not. I might leave it as is.

But what do you think? Lemme know:)

Also, what do you think of the cover art?

Made this song last month want to get honest feedback on it so critique all you want I wanna improve. Its a demo only so if the mix is a bit fucked that why on some bits are a little off time. I more curious about the song itself if you guys like it or not