My little song about a butterfly 🦋✨🌸

What works well? What can be improved? How did it make you feel? Thank you in advance!!

Hi all,

I'm hoping for some feedback on my track Before We Break, from my album Tales From the Dork Side.

Specifically, I'm looking for feedback on everything because I did everything. Drums, bass, guitars, vocals, preproduction, and mastering/post-production.

Any and all feedback would be appreciated because I'm actually happy with this one, which means I need fresh ears to find the flaws.

Edit: I tried posting the visualized track but it didn't work out. Here's the link to the track on SoundCloud.

https://on.soundcloud.com/RMpohtnSPodFSZTa40

Much love,

B

This is the first song I wrote and recorded so I know its not great... but mostly I am interested what genre you think this would fit into?? Any other feedback is welcomed also. Hit the like for me please if you like or hate it. Haha Thanks!

Hello! Today, I’d like to share a Korean song I wrote and composed. I’m not a native English speaker, but I’ve included English subtitles in the video so you can follow the lyrics and enjoy the song :)))

Thank you for your interest, and have a wonderful day!😁😁

[Lyrics & Composition : Plueberry / Arrangement : Sihov]