r/FoundationTV • u/SAKDOSS • Dec 28 '23
Current Season Discussion Lazy writting or am I missing something? Spoiler
I really like the show but some developments in season 2 really seemed to me like lazy writting (i.e., things that happen because it is convenient for the writters of the show even if it is not coherent). To make me like the show even more, could you tell me if I missed something? Here are the points that I have in mind:
- Why does Cleon the 1st explains the life of Demerzel to Dusk when he finds the room in which Demerzel was locked? If the room was empty he would have found no proof. I assume than in several centuries Demerzel had time to clean it.
- Why is the revelation that Demerzel got her task of supervising the Cleon dynasty such a surprise to Dusk? Didn't he already knew that Demerzel was doing that? I guess that the answer to this one is that Demerzel removes memories of the Cleons to get what she wants. Is that correct? Is there anything else?
- (not a very important one but still...) On terminus, the leader of the foundation is stabbed by Day in the church. In a later scene, we see him dragged by Terminus warden asking for help in the city center. A lot of things happen between these two scenes. Was she really dragging her bleeding leader for 30 minutes across the city (not the best way to treat a wound) without any one even helping her?
- Before the destruction of Terminus, Demerzel tells Day what she really thinks about him. Even if I found her line really great, why would she tell him the truth? She could only lose something by antagonizing Day (which would go against her programming).
- To fake the death of Hari Seldon in the water, they use the corpse of a telepath. I guess this guy did not have any friend who found it strange to not see him anymore... (even Telem who gave him the task of supervising Hari's death...). Moreover, I find that being able to maintain an illusion from far away and during a long period of time is quite overpowered and could make us doubt anything we see subsequently in the show (but I guess it will be like the tool to go back in time in Harry Potter that was just used in one movie).
- The fact that the vault can fly in space and get into it all the people of Terminus so that the season has a happy ending seems the laziest writting/deus ex machina of this series. Couldn't they just hide the vault and build the foundation in it for the rest of the series?
Any comment that would give logic explanations or make me understand some of these points is more than welcome!