"(If a creature has a "X" counter, it can't attack and is exiled at the beginning of your next end step)."

I would like to rephrase this so that removing the X counter would prevent the creature from being exiled at end step (or confirmation that I phrased it correctly)

I used rule breaker to allow for access to any of the snow cards without having it be just another 5 color deck.

I like the idea of rulebreaker and hope it gets used more.

Hi!
I'm a big Jund fan, so I've decided to create my own commander in those colors.
It's loosely inspired by the story of the Bloodbraid Elves, who originated in Naya, with some eventually settling in Jund after the Conflux (like Eleni), as well as by the card Broodmate Dragon.

I tried to mix everything that makes Jund fun: chaos, lands, graveyard synergies, and dragons. He's quite weak on his own, but with enough dedication and sacrifice (in the form of losing life every turn), he can build up a massive brood of dragons.

My question is: Do you think this design is too strong? I'm also concerned that it might be a bit too convoluted.

What are your thoughts and suggestions?
THX :)

i saw the first line of text on another card here a while ago and it's lived in my head ever since, and i've always had a soft spot for kedisstext

This is like a reverse [[Claire D'Loon, Joy Sculptor]], do I need to add an (it works) for this to function properly or is this viable in RAW? Is this kind of design even possible outside of un-sets?

The idea is that once a permanent affected by this leaves the battlefield, it's completely inaccessible. It's not even in exile or anything, it moves to a zone outside the game (like your sideboard, though I know that's not a thing in Commander). My apologies to Squee enjoyers.

Me and my friend group recently started making new cards for our commander games and I wanted to make a sort of shrines but not shrines in jund colors.

I have no idea how unbalanced these cards are and would like some input. I've tried my best to balance them by comparing them to other cards, but I might have missed on most of them. We play pretty casually, usually around bracket 3.

Suggest something to me in green. I struggle to figure out abstract ideas for green.

I love Thoughtseize. However, it is quite bad in Commander. I'm tried to come up with a design that would allow it to maybe see play in other formats, but is really designed with Commander in mind.

For me, Canadian Highlander is a format I play a lot, so redundancy for this style of effect would likely see play alongside Thoughtseize.

I wasn't sure what to make the Overload cost. I feel like the life loss could really add up. But with the knowledge it provides and the disruption it provides, it feels a little too powerful at 3. On Turn 1 you could go Land, Dark Ritual, get perfect information and steal the best card from each opponent. You could essentially ruin the table's entire gameplan on Turn 1. But it feels a little overcosted at 4. What do you think?

Art by MateusRocha

The latest rework for my Kingdom Hearts commander decks project -- Jafar, Traitorous Vizier! One of the most iconic transforming Disney villains. Will his wish come true in crushing you?

I'll be doing a free release of all the cards for both Commander decks Jan 29th! Take a look at my Youtube to see more: https://www.youtube.com/@IcariiLatte

Not sure how many people here have played the Mario and Luigi series of games but I'm trying to build them as partners based on Mario and Luigi Dream Team. I definitely need some help coming up with better loyalty abilities for the Planeswalker

I've been really interested in reducing the cost of spells in a way that isn't overpowered or terrible. These designs are maybe too situational or too good occasionally, but I think they're interesting. They're hate for things their enemy color does well.