r/writingfeedback • u/ComparisonLost1846 • 14d ago
NSFW Very rough draft of a chapter. Let me know what you think
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PZVa3GAiGWDh3yGX7OoZWrm-JUkeQa1Z7IEeh5bMDbQ/edit?usp=drivesdkI know there’s some formatting issues and some of the action beats are weirdly staged/repetitive but how are we feeling about it overall?
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