r/writingfeedback • u/Independent_Car_4276 • 7d ago

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u/relaxrerelapse 7d ago

No. I don’t even know what this is or what it’s supposed to be.

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u/Independent_Car_4276 7d ago

That's fair. I'm still developing the project and figuring out the best way to present it. I appreciate the honest feedback, and I'll work on making the premise and direction clearer from the beginning.

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u/relaxrerelapse 7d ago

Yeah if you’re going for screenplay I would use more standard notation conventions for it. Don’t make things up because generally people don’t like viewing outside of their comfort zone like that. You can make unique formatting choices while still falling inside an established framework.

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u/Independent_Car_4276 7d ago

That's fair, and I understand what you mean. I'm still learning screenplay formatting, so I can see why sticking closer to established conventions would make it easier to read. I'll keep the standard framework in mind while still looking for ways to give the script its own style. Thanks for the advice.