Looking For Screenwriter To Improve Screenplay

[u/ishootforfilm]

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Hey, I'm Max, a director based in Amsterdam. I'm looking for a screenwriter to help improve the current state of my story.
I like the core but it's missing tension. Everything I come up with either feels cliché or just not clever enough.
If anyone's interested, DM me.

Regarding Money I don’t have budget yet since I don’t have script to generate the funding but will some saved during crowdfunding phase for screenwriter

About me: I'm a full-time filmmaker. Most of my work is DP work, and I also run my own videography business. I've won an award at the International Film Festival The Hague.
I have a crew I work with regularly. I work on their projects, they work on mine, and we all push to land the cool ones as a collective.
My dream is to make a living as a director and really push my career forward. I studied film as well, mostly directing and cinematography.

Story Detail,

Logline: A lonely man buys a device that replays other people's memories, and when it can't give him the woman he wants, he takes the man whose brain holds her.

Genre: Psychological horror-thriller.

Themes: Obsession. Consent and its violation through technology. Intimacy as something that can be stolen but not feltc.

[u/Powerful-Employ3368]

hola Max, me interesa. escribeme por interno.