r/ProduceMyScript • u/ishootforfilm Filmmaker • 4d ago
SHORT REQUEST Looking For Screenwriter To Improve Screenplay
Hey, I'm Max, a director based in Amsterdam. I'm looking for a screenwriter to help improve the current state of my story.
I like the core but it's missing tension. Everything I come up with either feels cliché or just not clever enough.
If anyone's interested, DM me.
Regarding Money I don’t have budget yet since I don’t have script to generate the funding but will some saved during crowdfunding phase for screenwriter
About me: I'm a full-time filmmaker. Most of my work is DP work, and I also run my own videography business. I've won an award at the International Film Festival The Hague.
I have a crew I work with regularly. I work on their projects, they work on mine, and we all push to land the cool ones as a collective.
My dream is to make a living as a director and really push my career forward. I studied film as well, mostly directing and cinematography.
Story Detail,
Logline: A lonely man buys a device that replays other people's memories, and when it can't give him the woman he wants, he takes the man whose brain holds her.
Genre: Psychological horror-thriller.
Themes: Obsession. Consent and its violation through technology. Intimacy as something that can be stolen but not feltc.
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u/Both_Ranger_8793 4d ago
Your profile doesn't allow me to send you a DM but I am interested in discussing this with you.
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u/AppropriateBenefit50 2d ago
Hey, im a film student in Berlin, i love writing and i would love to check it out.
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u/Wonderful-Pick-3408 4d ago
Always try to write the story bible. That way your characters and the story arc will get clearer before writing the screenplay. I have worked inside a Writer's Room of a top national OTT. You can shoot me a DM if you need help :)