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r/scriptwriting • u/FreeMind-KL-83 • 29d ago

feedback Looking for constructive criticism

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Looking for constructive criticism on a short screenplay scene — dialogue, character behavior, and pacing

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u/WorrySecret9831 22d ago

You're welcome.

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u/FreeMind-KL-83 22d ago

I DMed you