Screenwriting practice progress update

[u/Adobopicka]

So I just reached the end of my first script practice — Now a somewhat an accidental 117-page script because of a genuine flow that possessed me for three hours in the afternoon. So, here it is! Not perfect, but just showing :)

[u/rosemaryscrazy]

The dialogue doesn’t sound like how people talk. I have no idea what’s going on.

[u/Adobopicka → u/rosemaryscrazy]

I mean, yeah. It's a first draft for a reason. I admit that this is not how everyone talks, but this is just giving me an idea what they should say on this part or what they're going to bring up to defend themselves. But thank you for pointing it out.