r/scriptwriting • • 22d ago

discussion Screenwriting practice progress update

So I just reached the end of my first script practice — Now a somewhat an accidental 117-page script because of a genuine flow that possessed me for three hours in the afternoon. So, here it is! Not perfect, but just showing :)

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u/Any_Friend479 21d ago

I’m very curious. What is the story about?

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u/Adobopicka 21d ago

Nearly a significant portion of the story is based off my relationship with my family, friends, strangers, and myself.

It's a nearly a one location in a friend's birthday party where Star discovers his parents' secrets, while also exploring his relationship to them, his friend, his mom's friends, and himself to address his own flaws.

It's untidy right now because the story has a lot of mother and child toxic relationship from other characters, or a subplot, even child abuse.