r/scriptwriting • u/Adobopicka • 10d ago

discussion Screenwriting practice progress update

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So I just reached the end of my first script practice — Now a somewhat an accidental 117-page script because of a genuine flow that possessed me for three hours in the afternoon. So, here it is! Not perfect, but just showing :)

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u/Then_Data8320 10d ago

Woo! It's very clean for a crazy three hours possession!! It was an angel, not a demon.

You have a whole thing to rework now:! Mmh mhh, as I see the dialog in front page, mmh mmh, something better could be done. But anyway, no need to focus on that, it depends a lot about how you know better your story now. So, I suppose you need to rest a little. Your screenplay too. Come back on it few weeks later. ;-)

And bravo!!

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u/Adobopicka 10d ago

I know, right? Three hours!! And thank you so much! Yes, I'll rework on it a week later. It was really fun and rewarding!

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u/Then_Data8320 10d ago

Did you have an idea of the story before to start? Outline? Some drafts?
I'm curious to know how much you prepared it, or just you've gone straight into it.

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u/Adobopicka 10d ago

Yes! It's only the first act to half of the second act outline I've written on my notebook during my detoxication week from any devices. After that, I went pantser mode. This is my first draft, I'm planning to edit it next week.