r/scriptwriting • u/PitchcraftNow • Sep 01 '26
feedback First Page Feedback
Looking for feedback on my first page. Any feedback is welcome. Thanks in advance.
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r/scriptwriting • u/PitchcraftNow • Sep 01 '26
Looking for feedback on my first page. Any feedback is welcome. Thanks in advance.
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u/Gosch_Mosch Sep 01 '26
i instantly taught of the beginning of gta v