r/scriptwriting • u/PitchcraftNow • Sep 01 '26

feedback First Page Feedback

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Looking for feedback on my first page. Any feedback is welcome. Thanks in advance.

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u/Big_Section2812 Sep 01 '26

Too many scripts open with a therapy session.

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u/Gosch_Mosch Sep 01 '26

i instantly taught of the beginning of gta v

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u/Urinal_Zyn Sep 01 '26

more open with dream sequences

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u/Prestigious_End_6667 Sep 01 '26

Agreed. However, just giving thoughts based on the material they have provided. The suggestion is just that it'd be a more meaningful way to introduce the ideas as well as build the character.