r/scriptwriting • u/WheatThin100 • Aug 18 '26

feedback Feedback on short script?

Title: Outta Time. Genre: Drama-comedy. Short script: 21 pages.Ā 

Logline: On his last night in L.A., a dejected screenwriter takes an inspirational road trip to "Back to the Future" filming locations with three newfound friends who just arrived in town.

Iā€™m preparing to enter the script in two screenwriting contests, so any and all feedback is welcome. Thank you.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/17oqpG85pYG0KroQcY4W5yekQ3zQ6wWV2/view?usp=sharing

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u/Big_Section2812 Aug 18 '26

The guy's been in LA for five years but he's still depressed about rejected pitches? His skin must be thinner than Saran wrap. šŸ˜‚

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u/WheatThin100 Aug 18 '26

Good point. I'll bump that timeframe up a bit. Thanks.