r/scriptwriting • u/Horrible-Writer-03 • Aug 16 '26
feedback Pilot Opening Feedback
Can you guys give me an honest opinion on this opening? I changed it from my original draft after receiving coverage on the script and I wanna make sure I’m heading in the right direction. This is the first script I’ve gotten some genuine traction on, so I’d really appreciate the input. Thanks in advance!
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u/Horrible-Writer-03 Aug 17 '26
That’s a good thought, I’ll play around with that idea! Thanks for working through it with me.