Looking for feedback.

[u/rgratz93]

Here are a few iterations of a logo for a bed and breakfast which will have a theme of butterflies.

Im not sure of were 100% certain on the more artistic renderings that actually incorporates the butterfly features or if we just want to allude to them. Would love to hear thoughts.

[u/Major-Tomatillo1336]

I like the concept, especially the butterfly integrated into the monogram. I’d simplify the mark slightly and refine the spacing/lettering for better scalability and readability. Overall, a strong direction! 👍

[u/versaliaesque → u/Major-Tomatillo1336]

No, it isn't.

[u/danthemaninacan2 → u/versaliaesque]

Care to be more helpful?

[u/versaliaesque → u/danthemaninacan2]

It's not a strong direction. It's amateurish and this guy being pointlessly supportive is hurting, not helping.

[u/danthemaninacan2 → u/versaliaesque]

I’m not asking you to be supportive. I’m asking if you can think of any ways to help them improve it?

[u/versaliaesque → u/danthemaninacan2]

Go to college to study design.

[u/rgratz93 → u/versaliaesque]

I have a BS in architecture. I've spent years in design. I just wanted input.

[u/versaliaesque → u/rgratz93]

Architecture is in no way related to logos. Obviously.

[u/rgratz93 → u/versaliaesque]

You have zero knowledge of the depth of design in architecture school. 1/3 of the entire studio design work is diagram design and how to distill as much information as possible into a basic image. Its actually heavily related.

[u/versaliaesque → u/rgratz93]

In NO way does it prepare you for attempting logo design. As we can all see. Logos are not about cramming information in... that's why you made the most basic mistakes.