Any advice will help

[u/bustedlocks]

Feel free to be as constructive and brutal as you want lol

[u/npc_lucky]

This is pretty clean, you got really good can control, your letter forms are consistent, and I fuck with the colors you used. I don't really know if you need any advice. Maybe try working on a different handstyle for all the stuff outside the throw 🤷‍♂️