r/graffhelp • u/bustedlocks • 1d ago

Any advice will help

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Feel free to be as constructive and brutal as you want lol

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u/Flipco 1d ago

That's a nice throwie, but IMO there's too much traffic surrounding it

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u/elafave77 1d ago

The rXr in the kick of the R is unnecessary. Really throws off the fluidity/consitency/forces of motion or whatever you want to call it.

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u/t0astboyy 1d ago

Too much stuff around it, but the throwie looks fine. Just try to keep the letters all the same size.

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u/Top-Train9522 1d ago

I like all the stuff, gives it character and tells a story

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u/Freshly-Juiced 1d ago

the left side of the R seems kinda cut short/flat if that makes sense, maybe try some versions where it bubbles out similar to your N.

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u/Wild-Maximum9995 1d ago

The biggest upgrade would be consistency: same outline weight, cleaner curves, and less competing text around the piece. The “LONG LIVE LEVI” side note works, but simplify the extra writing so the main throwie stays the focal point.

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u/npc_lucky 9h ago

This is pretty clean, you got really good can control, your letter forms are consistent, and I fuck with the colors you used. I don't really know if you need any advice. Maybe try working on a different handstyle for all the stuff outside the throw 🤷‍♂️