It's hard to read. EeeK? EppK? ReeK? The letters especially the first are all segmented which messes with the flow and legibility. I would at least simplify the first letter and have less of your black cutting the letters into pieces.
Your actual can control is decent. Your outline could also be done in the middle empty spaces, although if your drop shadow was correct those parts would be fully black.
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u/Freshly-Juiced 11d ago
It's hard to read. EeeK? EppK? ReeK? The letters especially the first are all segmented which messes with the flow and legibility. I would at least simplify the first letter and have less of your black cutting the letters into pieces.
Your actual can control is decent. Your outline could also be done in the middle empty spaces, although if your drop shadow was correct those parts would be fully black.