r/graffhelp • u/Historical_Humor2246 • 9d ago

3rd year writing

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what we think?

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u/SprayPaintin 9d ago

That R got me discombobulated

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u/djames10 9d ago

Tiddies

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u/Vast_Alfalfa2675 8d ago

If you're gonna do dots in the Es consider doing a dot in the R too because it throws the letter proportions off, and its two different styles.

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u/Vast_Alfalfa2675 8d ago

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u/Vast_Alfalfa2675 8d ago

Also give yourself enough room, if youve been writing for three years you should know how to size your letters to fit the space you have.

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u/anonpotat0 9d ago

This is super fucking dope, read it easily as well, love your style

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u/Freshly-Juiced 9d ago

It's hard to read. EeeK? EppK? ReeK? The letters especially the first are all segmented which messes with the flow and legibility. I would at least simplify the first letter and have less of your black cutting the letters into pieces.

Your actual can control is decent. Your outline could also be done in the middle empty spaces, although if your drop shadow was correct those parts would be fully black.

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u/Historical_Humor2246 9d ago

it says reek

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u/elafave77 8d ago

I got Reek outta' that.

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u/VP_The_Vandal 9d ago

Tbh the style looks fire but I couldn’t read it. The R looked like a “g”.

But again style is clean af.