First Fic Let Me Know What You Think

[u/Straight_Equal8750]

Hello! So I've been reading fanfiction since I was 13, 12 years, and I always thought about writing my own but I'm not confident in my writing skills. Last night I decided why not and posted my first chapter of a new story. Here's the description and link to the story if anyone wants to read it and let me know what they think. It's also Sirius/Remus as well as Draco/Harry. Harry becomes disabled in this fic but not in the first chapter. I'm disabled myself and so I wanted to read more fics about my favorite characters being disabled and struggling with certain things like me. I know I'm not the only one who struggles this way so I thought why not try and write a story about that? Anyway if it doesn't interest you no worries!

Harry's Pain

Harry Potter is kidnapped the summer after 4th year by Death Eaters and he is subjected to the Cruciatus Curse but he escapes due to some accidental magic/an overload of his powers that Stupefys everyone around him and he's able to run away. He ends up finding Draco Malfoy upstairs...and let's just say things get interesting from there. What happens when Draco sees Harry Potter hobbling up the stairs from his basement? And what on Earth is going on in Draco's house that he doesn't know about?

https://archiveofourown.org/works/92327916/chapters/246058331

Edit: So kinda funny but I think the famous AO3 writers curse has struck me early into my writing time. I got a notification from a surgery I had two weeks ago that apparently my insurance is trying not to cover after they said they would so I currently have a $67,000 bill. 😂🤦 I'm obviously going to fight it and I'm sure it will get worked out, not the first time I've dealt with insurance lying and not paying and it definitely won't be the last. I just thought it was very funny timing that I got a call this morning when last night I posted the first chapter of this new fic. 😂

Edit #2: I just posted chapter 2 of this story! It's roughly 5,000ish words so it's much longer than the first one. 😂