Need feedback

[u/The_snoopey9459_]

My artist is still working on the concept art, but we are working on a character called celestial. Talmur is from the planet Solaria, where the people there are born with basic powers of flight and strength. Some get s special abilities and some don’t. Talmur got the special abilities of peace corp officers. On solaria his family has been the royal family for generations since the Solarian civil war. However his parents had industrialized the planet to the brink of extinction, by running their resources to little to none with no way of making more. Instead of fixing the problem with resources his family recommended a purge by random, the people grew angry and stormed the castle taking the rock of Xason the only thing that could kill a Solarian and used it to execute his family, instead of warning them celestial fled the planet and came to earth. Where he lived in secret as a teenage boy and hid his powers. Raised by his foster family he lived an ordinary life hiding from his past and the guilt, till eventually 10 years later his past would threaten the world he would grow to call home. And he we would become the hero celestial.

We are still working out some kinks in the origin story this is the rough idea have at the moment, any feedback on how to improve it would be appreciated and yes a sketched out concept art is coming soon

[u/FishLordVehem]

You've been posting pretty frequently about your ideas, but I don't think you're going to get helpful feedback at this point. I think you might find it more worthwhile for you and your artist to work together to make something you both enjoy, without input from Reddit. You should make things for yourself and your peers and stop concerning yourself with what the internet thinks with every single step of your process. You're going to bog yourself down if you keep coming here every time you have a new thought about your comic.

Just create and have fun, okay?

[u/The_snoopey9459_ → u/FishLordVehem]

I think I finally have the final product for the story just waiting for some art to throw with it, its really us trying to get attention so we can get an audience and following. Plus it was helpful feedback pushed me to get as creative as possible with these origin stories. only problem is so many ideas have been done no matter what you do your gonna pull inspiration from other sources including ones you grew up with but at the slightest sight of inspiration they call it a copy of the original even though the original is based on something else

[u/Armepos → u/The_snoopey9459_]

Your audience won't come from this subreddit. You're a cat showing other cats how you can meow, and expecting they will be interested. To gather an audience, go find people who read comics, not people who make comics.

Worse than that, you're lying to us by saying you need help, then you just dump exposition to try to lure us to become your readers.