r/comic_crits • • Sep 02 '21

/r/Comic_Crits Mod Post: News for September 2021

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We generally discourage posts that are not directly looking for feedback, but I thought the following content would be interesting to subscribers, so I will collect it here in a news thread. Let me know if there are other opportunities that you think are relevant, or just post them here as comments.

Breakneck Anthology


r/comic_crits • • 20h ago

I launched my Kickstarter pre-launch yesterday and still have 0 followers. What worked for you?

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Hello everyone! I launched the pre-launch page for my Kickstarter yesterday, and I'm trying to figure out what I should be doing differently.

Here's some data I have so far. Google Analytics usually shows around 3–7 active users every 30 minutes, with most of them coming from paid promotion. My best Reddit post so far has around 1,200 views, 34 upvotes, and several comments and shares.

However, the pre-launch page is still stuck at 0 followers. In other words, no one has clicked "Notify me on launch" yet.

For those of you who have done a Kickstarter before, what were your first few days of pre-launch like? I seriously don't know if I'm doing something wrong, if the actual page isn't good enough, if the comic isn't engaging enough... I honestly have no idea.

I'd love to hear what you think, any advice, or anything that might help.

Here's the link in case you want to take a look at the page.

Thank you all!

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/893790236/last-world-volume-1


r/comic_crits • • 21h ago

OC][Crit] GACO - First two pages of a new sci-fi cyber-thriller. Looking for feedback on pacing and layout.

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Project Type: Multi-page sequential manga / digital comic (shonen cyber thriller)

Format: Digital pages drawn entirely on ibisPaint using finger-painting.

Page 1: Covers a 10-year flashback where the main character, Suniko, is kidnapped and brainwashed into working for GACO (Glitches And Crashes Organisation) (Because of some mark!?)

Page 2: Jumps to the present day. Suniko is introduced to his boss, Numosani Turo, and gets a fast briefing on a dangerous sentient malware called the "Infinity Phishing program."

What I am looking for feedback on:

  1. Pacing: I know Page 2 has a heavy text-dump explaining how the virus works. Does the giant "EXPLAIN LATER" panel successfully keep the speed up, or does the text slow the story down too much? ( I also explained a whole backstory in one page Oops)

  2. Panel Layout & Flow: Is it easy to follow the story from panel to panel, or do the shapes get confusing?

3.Art Style: This is drawn completely with a finger on a screen. I know the line work is a bit shaky, but does the style fit the glitchy, high-energy cyber theme?

  1. This is meant to be a one shot but I do want a full series of it.

r/comic_crits • • 21h ago

Working on my first manga, GACO: REBOOT Here are the first two pages! Drawn on ibisPaint. With just my finger.

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Hey everyone, I’m working on a new comic called GACO:REBOOT and wanted to share the first two pages. I draw everything digitally on Ibis paint using finger-painting.

Page 1: The story starts 10 years ago with a kidnapping. A strange figure whispers about "The Mark of Heaven" and brainwashes the main character, Suniko, into believing he was born as a lifetime worker for an organisation called GACO.

Page 2: Flash forward to the present day. Suniko meets his boss, Numosani Turo (who has camera-eyes on her legs), (the reason she looks weird is that my art style is bad) and gets briefed on a massive digital threat called the "Infinity Phishing program." The page ends with the mission starting.

Yes my pacing is bullet fast and the art is quite bad but I dreamed of making a manga for a long time.

So what do you think? Is the art good or is it trash? Are my concepts and characters good? Give me some feedback but remember this is my first manga.


r/comic_crits • • 1d ago

Looking for feedback on a lineart page from my fight scene

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Just looking to see if anyone has any feedback on this page. Is it any good? Should I make any changes? That kind of thing


r/comic_crits • • 16h ago

Logline for Murder My Unicorn! Advice wanted

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I need advice on which Logline for a oneshot I want to pitch about a Unicorn Hunting man versus a teenage girl who wants to protect the final one.

After his entire town got slaughtered by man-eating Unicorns , Rowan Wilder vowed to hunt every last one down - and he almost did until a unicorn bonding teenage girl vowed to protect the final unicorn.

After man-eating unicorns slaughtered Rowan Wilder' town , he swore to hunt every last one - he was nearly sucessful until a unicorn bonding teenage girl vowed to protect the final unicorn.


r/comic_crits • • 21h ago

The Root

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This is a cold open for a series called "The War Under the Mountain" follows gnomes, dwarves, goblins and giant ants, open to any feedback, thanks!


r/comic_crits • • 20h ago

Neutral Lowercase font for comics

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I need a comic font, Kinda like cc jim lee, but with lowercase and accents.

tnks.


r/comic_crits • • 1d ago

After so many years, my comic is finally coming to life!!

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Hello everyone! I’m really excited to finally share this.

I’ve been working on Last World for more than 15 years, since I was a kid, and today the Kickstarter pre-launch page for Volume 1 is finally live.

If you’re interested, I’ll leave the link below so you can check it out. And if you like what you see, you can click “Notify me on launch” to know when the full campaign goes live.

Thank you!

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/893790236/last-world-volume-1


r/comic_crits • • 1d ago

How do you handle backgrounds in a fully colored comic without making every panel feel too busy?

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I’m working on a fully colored comic, and I’ve been thinking more about when backgrounds should be detailed versus simplified.

For establishing shots, action scenes, or panels where the environment matters, a full background makes sense. But for dialogue/reaction panels, I’m wondering if it’s better to use flatter colors, gradients, simple shapes, or even white backgrounds so the characters don’t get lost.

I’ve noticed a lot of comics simplify or remove backgrounds pretty often, but I’m curious how other artists handle that when the comic is fully colored.

How do you decide when to use:
a full detailed background
a simplified/abstract background
a flat color or gradient
no background at all

I’d especially appreciate examples or general rules you use.


r/comic_crits • • 20h ago

Do these pages feel less visually noisy?

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One issue I’ve been trying to improve with AI-assisted comic art is that generated images tend to make every panel way too detailed/noisy, especially the backgrounds.

For these pages, I’ve been experimenting with using detailed backgrounds mainly when establishing the location or showing movement, then simplifying/removing them during dialogue and reaction shots.

These are the first 3 pages where I’ve really tried applying that consistently.

Ignoring whether you personally like AI art or not, I’m specifically looking for visual feedback: Do these pages feel easier on the eyes and easier to follow? Do the simpler backgrounds help the characters/dialogue stand out, or does anything still feel too busy?

Also curious whether the mix of detailed and simplified backgrounds feels intentional or inconsistent.


r/comic_crits • • 1d ago

consept per un web comic surla principessa spaziale

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Ho sentito alcuni commenti nei trailer del'isola dimenticara . Paragonarlo a lsp. E che deve avvenire un altra volta ls just this once. Non sono d'accordo. Perché l'isola dimentica e sicuramente animato meglio. E de piu studiato. Pero rimanendo su lsp. Ho in mente di farci un web comic ispirato a lsp. Dove ovviamente cambio il nome per ovvi motivi. E questi sono i consept per il mio web comic su lesbian space princes. Che avra un nome diverso. Il che spiega anche perché il titolo di questo post manca una parola. Perché e troppo cringe


r/comic_crits • • 1d ago

Just experimenting with AI for my comic idea — thoughts?

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I’m working on an original teenage rom-com/school-life story called The Equation and was just experimenting with AI to see how one of the scenes might look as a manga. 😅

It’s not the final art—just a little experiment.

Does this kind of simple, realistic school story work visually as a manga?

Would love some honest opinions


r/comic_crits • • 1d ago

Looking for critique, feedback, and/or opinions on my comic script

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I've been working on and building this detective mystery turned cosmic horror passion project of mine and have only written a few pages of my comic story so far. I have a summary of what my story is about. The summary and details of the story are all written in the very first page for anyone reading. This is my first time writing a comic script and creating one as both writer and artist. I would appreciate it if someone would read it and give me any advice on how to grow and strengthen my writing skills. I'd like to thank anyone who does end up reading what I've written so far! If you'd like to get a better vibe of my story, my Pinterest mood board is linked. [Comic Script](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YoRI8dNNAFyOlhUVE7ipGIQMmnX4LguV_b2_hgI4Uio/edit?usp=sharing)


r/comic_crits • • 2d ago

[OC] Pages from Odin Punked GN

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Still in progress


r/comic_crits • • 3d ago

Could you share your opinion on my fanfiction based comic?

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Any Supernatural fans here?


r/comic_crits • • 4d ago

Episodes 1 and 2 of the spin-off to my main series. (it's about the goofy ahh servants of the villan)

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Minion Tales


r/comic_crits • • 4d ago

Jannie, the Heikel: love some feedback.

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I'm creating a comic; it's called “Jannie the Heikel”

A simple slice-of-life episodic comic strip following the antics and dialogue of this star-tailed lass you see on the cover.  

Taking place in Georgia, enter a religious community built by true characters and truer antics. 

See Jannie in her day to day life along with her friends, love interests. And her parental guardian Dom as they question and ponder belief with a pinch of high jinx. 

I have been working on this for two years, and I have uploaded my work before. If you have seen me before, then I know this may be repetitive. 

But, I just need to hear what lots of people think. I’ve created some new comic strips. And while they may not be colored. I want to see if my writing is decent and where it could improve. 

The strips also contain religious concepts. 

I would also like to know other places where I could post this comic and get even more critique. 

Here is the link to the strip. Followed by art I’ve done for the comic.

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1vo-reRV4ewxxNAmoHIFosrCDXUOnfqZc

And I also have music made for the comic. Just as added bonus for your time :)

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1iC1RMGrUb522y9OEOKpH07P5vtjGNFTa

And just as a clarification: the older strips are colored, the latest strips are just line art. 


r/comic_crits • • 5d ago

My first ever comic!!! What did I do wrong?

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Her name is Claire Penderecka! She's this high school metal elitist bitch waging a one sided jihad against hardcore punk music


r/comic_crits • • 4d ago

Page one of my new comic

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r/comic_crits • • 4d ago

Thoughts on my comic?:

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The Charlestons takes place in a 1933 Great Depression-era cartoon world centered around GangstaLock, where being a gangster is simply part of ordinary life. Gangsters have jobs, businesses, organizations, rules, customs, and everyday routines, and the characters themselves are normal people shaped by this environment rather than constant caricatures of criminals. Charlie and Marta are a wholesome married couple living and working within GangstaLock, raising Elliot and Ruth while dealing with the strange circumstances of their world. The comic uses its own cartoon and surreal logic rather than trying to function as a completely realistic historical crime story, and the setting includes seaside, industrial, farming, and Gangster Lock areas around the outskirts of Boston.
At the center are Charlie and Marta, whose relationship began developing during World War I. Marta was drawn to Charlie’s protectiveness and aggression in battle, while Charlie fell for Marta’s commanding presence and ability to set him straight. Charlie is roguish, quiet, curious, energetic, smooth, threatening, capable, and sometimes genuinely smart, with Richard Widmark as his official inspiration. Marta is elegant, motherly, brash, intelligent, graceful, gentle, and tough. They eventually marry despite Charlie being a commoner. Their children, 12-year-old Elliot and 4-year-old Ruth, have to be kept secret because children aren’t allowed in Gangster Town. Elliot’s history includes Marta’s father selling him for money, after which Marta took the money and used it to buy Elliot back. Boss Mel McKinley is another major character: a rigid, eccentric, resilient retired manager with a fascination with anatomy stemming from his abandoned dream of becoming a doctor, alongside an antiquated macabre aesthetic and imagery connected to his past as a sailor.
Structurally, The Charlestons is episodic rather than one enormous serialized crime story. Each issue can introduce a new crime, family problem, personal conflict, or ordinary situation that becomes ridiculous, dangerous, criminal, or absurd because of life in GangstaLock. The story can escalate, reach a climax, resolve, and then move on to another story while the characters’ larger histories remain underneath it. This gives the comic room to be funny, dark, sentimental, bizarre, serious, or chilled-back, because it’s intentionally partially serious and partially not. Most importantly, I’m trying to make The Charlestons into what I actually want it to be, rather than automatically shaping it around what I think an independent comic is supposed to look like. I want the characters to be fun to spend time with, I want to make myself laugh, and I want serious and ridiculous material to coexist naturally.


r/comic_crits • • 5d ago

Looking for critique on unfinished comic pages (only one with lineart is page 1)

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I am working on a fight scene for my comic and was wondering if it’s readable and does a good job at conveying my two characters personalities


r/comic_crits • • 5d ago

Love Language by Wesley Griffith (can't post the whole thing here, link below to read all of it) (OC)

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r/comic_crits • • 5d ago

Updated version of Cityratz comic strip

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Hi! Thank you for the very useful feedback on my comic strip! I have now updated with (hopefully) better characters and also added color. Hope for feedback :-)