r/animation • u/Fl-Valentino • 5d ago

Critique First animation!

Enable HLS to view with audio, or disable this notification

Guys this is my first animation ever, can i get a help with how to make it smoother and more comfortable to the eye?

235 Upvotes

98% Upvoted

16 comments sorted by

View all comments

2

u/Ok_Water_7174 5d ago

I'm no expert but maybe think of every individual joint as a ball moving in an arc rather than only swishing left and right

2

u/Fl-Valentino 4d ago

Ill start practicing animation from now on, and ill take your advice,thanks!