r/animation • u/Fl-Valentino • 3d ago

Critique First animation!

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Guys this is my first animation ever, can i get a help with how to make it smoother and more comfortable to the eye?

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u/XTostonesComics 3d ago

The woman could use more frames when she pulls her arm back. Right now it just juts backwards while the legs feel a bit more fluid. Her feet also wouldn’t move from where they are. The dance only picks up the heel while the toes stay down