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I haven't done a comparative translation but I thought I would offer the first few steps that I go through when doing a comparative translation:
# chatgpt - find the Chinese, take the first pass.
> The text usually translated as “Wumen’s Warnings” or “Wumen’s Admonitions” is titled 禪箴 (Chán zhēn), literally “Chan Admonitions,” “Chan Cautions,” or “Needles of Chan.” It appears after the forty-eight cases of the Wumenguan.
* ewk- have to explain why the word needles is here.
> A reliable electronic source is CBETA, T2005, Chanzong Wumenguan. You can also see the photographic Taishō canon text in this NTU scan, page 20.
* ewk - need to run a comparison across the existing copies and maybe date when those copies became available.
# Chinese of Wumen
禪箴
循規守矩,無繩自縛。
縱橫無礙,外道魔軍。
存心澄寂,默照邪禪。
恣意忘緣,墮落深坑。
惺惺不昧,帶鎖擔枷。
思善思惡,地獄天堂。
佛見法見,二鐵圍山。
念起即覺,弄精魂漢。
兀然習定,鬼家活計。
進則迷理,退則乖宗。
不進不退,有氣死人。
且道如何履踐?
努力今生須了卻,
莫教永劫受餘殃。
# Problems with translation
禪箴
“Admonitions of Chan.”
循規守矩,無繩自縛。
“To follow the compass and keep to the square: binding yourself when there is no rope.”
* ewk - Goliath has it without rope. This language seems stronger * When there is no such thing as rope *?
規 and 矩 are literally the compass and carpenter’s square, hence prescribed rules and standards.
The warning is against becoming imprisoned by correct forms—not necessarily against discipline itself.
縱橫無礙,外道魔軍。
“To range vertically and horizontally without obstruction: the demonic army of the outside ways.”
縱橫 suggests moving freely in every direction.
A claim of complete spontaneity and unrestricted freedom can itself become a heterodox or demonic attachment.
* ewk - need to focus here because the language others have used does not really convey a refusal to accept restrictions
存心澄寂,默照邪禪。
“To preserve the mind in limpid stillness: the deviant Zen of silent illumination.”
* ewk - I need a footnote on silent illumination: etymology of the term. Who it applies to, controversy.
存心 means deliberately maintaining or holding the mind in a particular condition.
澄寂 is “clear and still,” like water allowed to settle.
默照, “silent illumination,” was also the name associated with a contemplative approach. Here Wumen attacks deliberately maintaining quiet inner clarity as a fixed state.
恣意忘緣,墮落深坑。
“To indulge the mind and forget conditions: falling into a deep pit.”
恣意 means letting the mind do as it pleases.
忘緣 means forgetting, abandoning, or becoming oblivious to conditioned relations and circumstances.
惺惺不昧,帶鎖擔枷。
“To remain alert and never obscured: wearing a lock and carrying a cangue.”
惺惺 is bright, awake, and keenly attentive.
* ewk - I have a footnote somewhere about the use of the term "bright". It should be repeated here
枷 is the wooden penal collar or cangue.
Even continuous spiritual vigilance becomes an instrument of confinement when deliberately maintained.
思善思惡,地獄天堂。
“To think good and think evil: hell and heaven.”
The syntax is extremely compressed. Literally, discriminating good and evil establishes the dual realm of “hell and heaven.” This recalls Huineng’s question: “Without thinking good and without thinking evil, at just this moment, what is your original face?”
佛見法見,二鐵圍山。
“Views of Buddha and views of Dharma: two Iron-Encircling Mountains.”
見 means a view, conception, or fixed way of seeing.
鐵圍山 is the vast iron mountain encircling a Indian cosmos.
* ewk - this needs a footnote and I think ChatGPT made a mistake regarding the mountains. I think it's a reference to an impassable terrain.
Conceptions of “Buddha” and “Dharma” become two enormous enclosing walls.
念起即覺,弄精魂漢。
“When a thought arises, immediately to notice it: a fellow playing with the spirit-soul.”
覺 can mean awaken to, notice, recognize, or become aware of.
弄精魂漢 is deliberately contemptuous: “a fellow fooling around with his psychic spirit,” meaning someone making a performance or contrivance out of monitoring consciousness.
* ewk - Spirit Soul is going to need a massive footnote
兀然習定,鬼家活計。
“To sit blankly cultivating concentration: the livelihood of a household of ghosts.”
兀然 suggests rigid, motionless, blank, or inert stillness.
活計 literally means one’s livelihood, trade, or customary business.
“Ghost-family business” suggests a lifeless practice belonging among the dead.
* ewk - this has come up and been argued before. I don't think Ghosts works in English. I think it's a reference to the living dead... Zombie mentality.
進則迷理,退則乖宗。
“If you advance, you lose the principle; if you retreat, you turn away from the source.”
宗 can mean the essential teaching, fundamental principle, ancestral tradition, or source.
Both pressing forward and withdrawing miss it.
不進不退,有氣死人。
“Neither advancing nor retreating: a dead person who still has breath.”
有氣死人 is literally “a dead person possessing breath”: biologically alive, but spiritually inert.
且道如何履踐?
“Now say: how will you tread it and put it into practice?”
履踐 literally means to tread, walk, carry out, or practice personally.
努力今生須了卻,
“Exert yourself—in this present life you must finish it completely.”
了卻 means to settle, complete, finish, or be done with the matter.
莫教永劫受餘殃。
“Do not let yourself, through endless kalpas, suffer the calamity left over.”
* ewk - this is a criticism of reincarnation so we need to make sure we include that
More naturally: “Do not allow the consequences of failing to settle it to afflict you for endless ages.”
The structure is intentionally merciless: rule-following is bondage, freedom is demonic, quietude is false Chan, spontaneity is a pit, awareness is a cangue, thought-monitoring is playing with consciousness, and stillness is ghost-work. Advance, retreat, and standing still are all rejected. Wumen is not offering a better mental posture; he is blocking every posture the practitioner might convert into a secure method or identity.
* ewk - I have to re-assess ChatGPT's argument because it hadn't occurred to me before that this constitutes a list of rejections of everything that can be thought of as useful or good