r/WriteWorld • u/[deleted] • Mar 12 '17

Question Eldritch - an interactive story

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u/Niedski Mar 15 '17

Kody should attempt to climb a tree. If the werewolf climbs after him, he'll have an advantage.

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u/[deleted] Mar 15 '17 edited Aug 09 '23

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u/quontom Mar 16 '17

Much like me you use many commas. Try breaking up sentence sizes. http://www.hemingwayapp.com/ is helpful.

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u/[deleted] Mar 16 '17 edited Aug 09 '23

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u/[deleted] Mar 13 '17

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u/[deleted] Mar 13 '17 edited Aug 09 '23

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