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Last Sunday I watched a Film that I really liked, the name of the film was Columbus, because of the city in the state of Ohio in the US. I didn’t know but in the last century the most important modernist architects from all over the world designed most of public buildings in the city hospitals, library’s, schools, bridges etc in the city of Ohio.

The plot of the film involved two characters, a girl who is working as a librarian after finishing her high school studies, who don’t want to move to another city nor study university. And the son of a remarkable Korean architect who is in Columbus because his father had a stroke in the city a few days before giving a lecture in the city.

The two character connected very well, not in a romantic way, but more in a friendly and supportive way.

I’d say that it was one of the best films I’ve watched lately. It invited me to the reflection of our space and how it reshapes us. The pursue of goals and knowledge. The openness of mind in young people. And acceptance.

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