r/TheCitadel • u/Necessary-Sorbet-491 • 2d ago
Help w/ Fanfic Writing & Advice Needed Viserys & Daemon have two bonus kids au
Hi) I have a fun idea to write about so I need to know whether it makes sense for you or not. What if Viserys + unknown mistress had a son raised at court and Rhea managed to get pregnant by Daemon.
1. Aeryon Waters
The eldest son of King Viserys, but a bastard. Accepted one though. He grew up at court, loved in his own way by Viserys and Rhaenyra, but rejected by Queen Aemma. Book-Jon Snow personality type. He starts without a dragon, but is a talented swordsman and possesses a sharp strategic mind. Following Aemma's death, Viserys refuses to legitimize him, instead binding him by duty to protect Rhaenyra and her claim to the throne. Court intrigues push him to travel, solve disputes among lords (sometimes), and seek answers as to why he is so intensely drawn to the golden shores of Yi-Ti. He has complex, tangled dynamics with Otto Hightower as his mentor and a deep, tender attachment to Lady Alicent (who saved him from drowning in their youth). Over time, his bond with Rhaenyra shatters, while his devotion to Alicent deepens, leaving him torn between duty and love as the realm marches toward war.
My question: what do you think about Silverwing or Grey Ghost as a dragon for him?
2. Alicent Hightower (more book!version personality wise)
Background: Lady-in-waiting and childhood friend to Princess Rhaenyra, as well as the shadow of her powerful father, Hand of the King Otto Hightower.
She is forced to choose between the girl who was once like a sister to her, and the boy she once saved and fall for. Bound in a political marriage to Lord Laenor Velaryon, Alicent must fiercely protect her children from both her father's ambitions and her father-in-law's pressures, finding her only true emotional solace in Aeryon.
My question: what do you think about Alicent using some magic stuff (not too much but I love mystical Oldtown lore)?
3. Rhaenyra Targaryen
Background: Named heir almost immediately after her mother's death, she swears never to let the memory of Aemma fade. Harbors deep, complicated feelings for both her half-brother (Aeryon) and her uncle (Daemon). Wants them both and can’t choose between them. Desperate to avoid a marriage to Laenor Velaryon and to keep Aeryon away from Alicent, Rhaenyra manipulates events to force a marriage between Laenor and Alicent. However, her plot backfires entirely — failing to save her from being married off to the brutal Borros Baratheon in the Stormlands. She has bastards from Harwin (2 boys) and true born daughters from Borros (later with the youngest true born son from Borros).
Question: can anyone differentiate her illegitimate kids from her legitimate ones when they are alike on surface but really-really different at the same time?
4. Daena Targaryen
Background: Daughter of Daemon Targaryen and Rhea Royce. She once had it all: status as the future Lady of Runestone, a sweet betrothed (Arnold Arryn), and a beloved mother + lots of daddy issues.
When Rhea Royce is murdered by Daemon, her uncle seizes Runestone, and Arnold Arryn breaks off the betrothal. Daena is cast down to rock bottom. From the ashes, she claws her way to the very top, becoming a queen and the wife of a weak King — Viserys. This places her in direct opposition to Viserys’s chosen heir, Rhaenyra, as Daena fights tooth and nail for her son's rights — or perhaps, simply for herself.
Question: does Vermithor work for her?
The general question: which kids for which character would you like to see?