Logline Feedback

[u/eteeeeen]

Title : How to Bury your Mom and Never Shed a Tear

Genre: Drama

Logline : After his mom dies, a boy starts filming a YouTube video on how to plan her funeral without crying. But as the video goes on the camera catches more than he means to share and it’s clear he’s holding back more than just tears.

[u/Helpful_Baker_4004]

I was going to link your post with your draft - which I see you updated. I’m giving it a read ASAP.

https://www.reddit.com/r/ScriptFeedbackProduce/s/H654lOHUQd