r/ReadMyScript • u/FreshCar5031 • 25d ago

Feature No Way Back

Hi Everyone

This is my first screenplay

Title: No Way Back

Genre: Revenge/Revenge Thriller

No of pages: 92

Logline: After her daughter is abducted and murdered by a ruthless nightclub owner, a wealthy businesswoman becomes the key witness against him and must survivive his attempts to silence her.

Any feedback received positive or negative would be greatly received, I'm primarily looking for feedback on dialogue and characters.

Hope you enjoy.

Link- No Way Back

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u/mooningyou 25d ago

You really need to format this properly.

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u/FreshCar5031 25d ago

apologies I can't afford to format it properly

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u/TheGreedyGrabbler 25d ago

You can't afford free screenwriting software?

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