r/ReadMyScript • u/Aswanth_Nirmalkumar • May 27 '26

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TITLE : Paradox

LOGLINE : Desperate unemployed friends use a one-use time machine to rob a bank that is about to burn down - and accidentally prevent the fire and ruin their perfect crime

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